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Originally Posted by Koir
I misspoke. There are only two reasons stated for using the expression, so the ideal revision would be to put them in parallel structure. This is very difficult for even native speakers to do as it's a formal way of speaking. So the two reasons were left in their original forms and not similar to each other in form. It's not an ideal result, I apologize.
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To put them in parallel structure, what should I write?
How can I revise the sentence?
My original is :
However, we say that both when we say Good Night to a person who is going to bed, and when we are going to bed.
Thanks!