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08-22-2010, 03:37 AM

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Originally Posted by dogsbody70 View Post
I noticed the above item in your message. RE--"But the shop didn't have ones for children." It would be better to write, "the shop did not stock suitable hydroscopes for children."
Hi, dogsbody.
That sentece seems to be very good.
Thank you for the better expression.
I'll be counting on you!


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