[steel87]

Hi I have a speech I have to hold in japanese on how I screwed something up. My text might not make any sense but any feedback on what I did wrong and should change is much appreciated. I did the text in eng too as an reference but it's very simplified cuz I'm only a beginner.


金曜日にぼくと彼女はパーテイーに行きました。でもそ のまえにぼくは木曜日におそくまで勉強したので朝寝坊 しまいました。ぼくの目覚まし時計がこわれましたそれ はぜんぜんきがつかなかったでした。ぼくははやく起き て、着替えなくちゃいけませんでした。六時ごろ駅に着 きました。彼女を待たせました、彼女は本当に怒ってい ました。でも　怒るのにぼくにしんぱいしました。彼女 はぼくの大切な人がいるのでもう一度接待に彼女をしん ぱいになるくないと言ました。そのあとは彼女は感動し たと笑っていました。ときどきばくがきらいてもいつも 好きです。

Last Friday me and my girlfriend went to a party but before that I overslept because I had studied late that thursday before. My alarm clock had broken and I hadn’t realized that at all. I had to get up quickly and change my clothes. At around 6 o’clock I arrived at the station, I had made my girlfriend wait for me. She was really angry but even though she was angry she was worried about me too. Because she’s my precious person I told her that no matter what I wouldn’t make her worried again. After that she was moved and laughed. Even though she hates me sometimes she always loves me.