Hi
Can anyone help me with this ?
I'm writing about my students in English,and this is one of them.
I'd like to make it sounds simple but natural for my students (10-15 years old) to read.
Can anyone correct this for for me?
Minori is a 7 years old girl and she loves drawing.
She gave me a lot of her work (I mean her drawing and painting work)
and this is one of them (the pic below) , she said this was her favourite.
Now she has to leave the school, because her family is moving to Tokyo this month.She was almost crying when her mother was telling me about that.
She stopped drawing since. She said it's because she didn't feel like it anymore.I was so sad too.
I actually put her drawing here.(She said it's OK)
I love kids drawing, they are amazing and give me a smile always.
I hope you enjoy it too.