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back from outer space :D
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Posts: 262
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: near the sun, with the moon..kissing the shooting stars..this is where i am
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10-02-2010, 04:30 AM
I really liked your two poems. :] I love writing poetry, I think Ill put some more up later that I actually have on my facebook :P
A part that stuck out to me the most was
"One of my X's is yours, right?
Too bad the doctors didn't have a microscope to check
that time."
I like it...it kinda gives me a good chill reading it 
the real truth is often the one we dont want to hear
i am the tears that fall, you are the blood on my skin, we are mingled forever again, here we stand, hand in hand, but ill let go when my time has come, time for u to fly alone
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