[Maxful]

Hi masaegu san, could you check if the following sentences are correct? The reason why I used intransitive for the first sentence is because it is beyond my control if the students decide if they want to view the planet or not.


学生は惑星を見るために公園に集まる。
Those students gather in a park in order to view the planet.

僕たちは惑星を見るために公園に集める。
We gather in a park in order to view the planet.