Oh, please don't go to that much trouble! I mean, it's a neat story and all, but if it wasn't originally something you'd be into, I hate to think of you spending your time reading it just for this.
Really, the sort of help you've been providing is more than I could have hoped for! And as I proceed with this, and learn more, I can go back to the rough spots and hopefully figure it out well enough to satisfy me, even if I can't come to a definite conclusion right now.
I was just finding myself getting stuck and unable to get myself to move on at all. With your help getting over the stoppers, I've finished two chapters now, with only a couple of things still iffy. I am more than pleased!