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Originally Posted by masaegu
ファストフード First syllable is usually elongated. Can't say it's incorrect, though.
悪いである Incorrect phrase.
ものすごく都市 Incorrect phrase.
健康に悪さだ Worst phrase so far.
おいしいである Incorrect phrase.
このおいしさは作るために時間がかかることだ makes little sense.
いい食べ物を食べないと Redundant, dontcha think? This is like saying 「アメリカに渡米する。」.
Where did you learn this "i-adj. + である" form???????
You can use anything that ends with だ.
～～だ、～～のだ、～～そうだ、～～なのだ, etc.
である is not counted as a だ体. Writing everything in だ体 is in no way a natural thing to do but here it's just requested for the sheer purpose of practing the forms.
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Fixing the である mistakes, ものすごく都市 was supposed to be ものすごく大きい都市 I believe I made a consistent spelling error because I meant to say 体に悪い not 健康. The only one I'm not entirely sure how to phrase is the 時間がかかる phrase. I had wanted to say 'It tastes good
because it takes time to make.' Also I realize that in my original writing I had ことからだ instead of ことだ though I'm not sure if that makes any different.
Would 体にいいものを食べないと sound less redundant? And finally, I wasn't taught to use である I just felt weird about using い adjectives with だ because I don't have much experience. This was the only alternative that popped into my mind because I couldn't use です and I didn't want to just end the sentence with an adjective. Had I known that this was incorrect I would never have used it in the first place, so thank you for letting me know.