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02-21-2011, 08:15 AM

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Originally Posted by amiko View Post
also I was wondering I repeated ぬいぐる so many times is it kind of weird? is there a way to avoid saying it repeatedly?
Seems you added this question while I was replying. Looking back, yes, you could cut down on its use.

でもその三日後そのぬいぐるみははんばいされていまし た > でもその三日後にははんばいされていまし た

Do NOT try to replace the noun by a pronoun in the sentence above (in case you are a European language speaker.)

まいにちそのぬいぐるみをハグしなければなりません  > まいにちハグしなければなりません OR まいに ちそれをハグしなければなりません

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