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Originally Posted by Cherryberry
hi everyone!
Am a fulltime student studying the Japanese language. Lately am encountring many grammer difficulties and my teacher isn't really helping me out.
So i thought maby i can find help on the net.
My homework involves a lot of translating texts and its also my oral exam so i was wondering if someone could check my translation.  |
There are
so many mistakes, 30 - 40 at the very least. Not sure why you get homework that is way above your current knowledge.
Just a few pointers:
1. The pronoun 「あなた」 has absolutely no place in this conversation. None. This alone will let you correct a dozen mistakes.
2. Why use the slang word 「びびる」 when the general style of your writing is nowhere near naturally colloquial but strictly textbookish?
3. Learn the past tense of adjectives. We never say 「すばらしいでした」.
4. Re-learn verb conjugations (from scratch, if I may add).
5. You are allowing English word order and phrase order to get in the way of writing proper Japanese.