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Originally Posted by TalnSG
This is not what anyone probably expected since we were discussing poems to lovers, but this the one Tipsygypsy's one about melting reminded me of.
Pasted Chickenwire
Sitting above everyone on the scaffold,
Dropping paste over all.
Could there be more paste on me
Than on the framework of the set?
Look out below?
No, it wasn't a bird.
Be glad!
I wonder how I'll get down
After all,
I'm pasted to to this wall.
.............
I threathened to stay there until "Prince Charming" rescued me - which he eventually did.
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i like chicken wire very much. ending was unexpected
also the starkness/brevity and depth of ryuurui's poems. no wasted words--