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03-28-2011, 02:39 AM

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Originally Posted by cloud9 View Post
Maybe if I change it to this, would it be correct?:
がんばって勉強するべきなんだが、たまに楽しく遊ぶこ とが必要ね。

You should study hard but it's important to have fun once in a while.
That is much better.

To make it sound more natural:
たまに > たまには
ことが > ことも


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