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Originally Posted by YuriTokoro
Hi.
Could someone correct my English?
“One Month after the Massive Earthquakes in Japan.”
One Month has passed.
Almost everything seems to be back the way it was in my town.
There are still aftershocks almost every day, but we normally have many of them in this country.
I live next to Tokyo, far from the affected area.
Watching the disaster areas on TV, frankly speaking, I cannot help wondering why they lived in those dangerous lower areas near the sea, and every time I can believe that you, non-Japanese people, would be curious why Japanese people live in this dangerous country with many earthquakes. Just as I cannot move out of my land, they cannot leave their towns.
A great number of countries have offered assistance to Japan.
They say it is 116 countries and regions. I wanted to write all the names of them here, but it is too many to type.
I can’t thank enough.
Thank you.
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Additional corrections added as an alternative view to your composition. As others have said, your English use is quite impressive now. Have a great week, Yuri!
