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Originally Posted by Darnellrbts
Sry for the double post I want to see f my self intro is good this time. I hoping no mistakes  .
はじめまして、 わたしはロバートです。 わたしはにじゅういっさいです。 わたしはまいにち本をよみます。 わたしはときどきえいがをみます。 わたしはよく水をのみます。 |
No mistakes for sure. If, however, the question had been: "Do Japanese-speakers speak/write like that?", then I am afraid I would have to say 'no'.
Many of us would use the pronoun only once
at the most to say what you said. Some would not use it even once because your reader/listener knows exactly who you are talking about.
You made no mistakes and I personally know that you have been studying very hard. We just do not have a "me-me-me" culture over here. I would suggest that you drop all the 「わたしは」's except, perhaps, the third one.