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Originally Posted by masaegu
No mistakes for sure. If, however, the question had been: "Do Japanese-speakers speak/write like that?", then I am afraid I would have to say 'no'.
Many of us would use the pronoun only once at the most to say what you said. Some would not use it even once because your reader/listener knows exactly who you are talking about.
You made no mistakes and I personally know that you have been studying very hard. We just do not have a "me-me-me" culture over here. I would suggest that you drop all the 「わたしは」's except, perhaps, the third one.
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Ok So when I'm talking about myself I can drop all the わたしは. Can you explain why I would keep it on the third one though?I really do appreciate all the help u are giving me.