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Originally Posted by Darnellrbts
Can you explain why I would keep it on the third one though?I really do appreciate all the help u are giving me.
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That is because I thought a change of pace might be a nice touch in there. You could rattle off the 5 things about yourself without using a pronoun once. However, all the sentenecs are very short; therefore, leaving one of the pronouns would make the over-all flow a little better.