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Originally Posted by KyleGoetz
I think 外国人の先生 is better, but I wouldn't take KyleGoetz's word for it.
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It is better. Another option would be 「海外からの先生」.
More imprtantly, though, OP's positioning of 「たくさん」 is incorrect. It should be placed immediately before the verb. If you change it to 「たくさん
の」 , you can keep it up where it is.
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I think にあります instead of です is better. I can't say for certain whether yours is wrong though. I do know にあります is definitely a correct way, though. It's the way I was taught.
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「にあります」 certainly sounds more refined but 「です」 is quite common in colloquial speech.
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I would not use 廿 for ２０, though. It might look a bit pretentious, but I'm not sure. I don't really encounter 廿 often. Play it safe and just do 20 or 二十.
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DO NOT use 「廿」. It should not have been taught to OP in the first place.