Next set of grammar instruction opportunities!
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Originally Posted by Dogburp
私は日本語教師です。
私の生徒は将来、外国貿易をやりたい。
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This is a very common mistake among people of all levels of non-native Japanese speaking. The 〜たい form is not used to talk about the desires of a third person. Instead, you use the 〜たがる verb form (and put it in the present progressive, 〜ている). "John wants to eat pizza" ジョンさんはピザを食べたがっています。
Next point is a general one: You are mixing different levels of formality in your writing. You are keeping the verb endings consistent (all ます form). However, at the time of me writing this, I've noticed you end at least one sentence with 楽しい instead of 楽しいです. This is a different style of writing. If you're using ます form to end sentences that end in verbs, then any sentence that ends in an い-adjective must end in です.
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最近デジタル黒板と学生が授業中ノートブックを使うは 人気になりました。
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This is still incorrect, but structured better. The real problem that jumps out is you forgot to nominalize 使う before は.
There are some things that could be done to refine this and make it flawless, but I think since this is a school assignment I don't want to go that far. I ask ask, however, whether you've learned the 〜てくる and 〜ていく structures yet.
Whoops, I've got to go for now! I haven't finished reading through it.