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09-16-2011, 01:10 PM
100% of it makes sense to me, PocketMonster. It doesn't sound like a native wrote it, but you already know that!
To verify that you wrote what you meant, here is what I learned from reading your paper:
Your hobbies: video games (5x week), computers (1 day 2 hours), movies (2x month).
You can play piano; not guitar. You play piano about 3x week. You can drive a car; not a motorcycle. You can play tennis but not baseball. You can sing and dance. It's fun and interesting, so you take Japanese.
It seems fun, so you want to try surfing. Someday you'd like to visit Japan, ride an elephant in India, see lions in Africa.
You like going shopping w/friends, watching anime, watching TV, watching videos, writing letters. You dislike writing reports. You like food at restaurants, you cook well, and you are enjoyably studying Japanese.
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