[TerenceLau]

The following is my attempt in creating a email-capturing slip for both English and Japanese customers of my store.

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Name （お名前）：
E-mail （電子メール）:

Please select the following, whichever applies.
以下の適当なことをお選びください。

__ To receive an e-receipt.
__ 環境保護のため、レシートはお客様の電子メールへお送 り致します。

__ To become a fan of Gap.
__ キャープの最新ニュースが電子メールにお届けられるフ ァンにおなりになります。

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I am keeping the English part simple as the items could be easily explained by any sales associate. I try to cram in more details in the Japanese counter parts for the opposite reason. Hopefully I could get a check of grammar and the proper use of keigo, as well as any improvement on my wordings.

On the side note, would Japanese people prefer to read small, condense sentences rather than long sentences like mine? I'd like to receive advice since I will be printing about 6 or 8 copies of these on an A4 paper.

Thanks in advance.