Thanks again for the confirmation, but now I'm getting confused in another way.
Quote:
痛ましい景色は 口元を歪めて
その目だれの目?を手招く
|
In this one, you said I could read it as その目
はだれの目?を手招く, so I pretended that there was a は and assumed that 痛ましい景色は口元を歪めて and その目だれの目?を手招く are two parts of a compound sentence, and so far I can only think of them this way.
Now for
Quote:
背きたい道順 愚かなる願いが
その目だれの目?を呼び込む
|
The latter part has the same structure, but since その目だれの目 in this case is the object, would the relation between その目 and だれの目 be like 背きたい道順 and 愚かなる願い?
Please tell me if I mistook something.
Also, may I read the verse like this?
Code:
背きたい道順 愚かなる願いがその目だれの目?を呼び込む
常識を離反した拒絶さえ許されないカオスが始まれば、頭ごと覗き込む