[Kokugen]

Originally Posted by Salvanas

Nice read. I'm not into Naruto myself. But it was interesting. Dam. You just made me want to post my story >.<

Post it, post it! I'll read it for sure! Sorry for the late rply I wanted to post up my story in a block for easier reading. Anyways that's all I got so far, I love writing the crying bits because in a lot of fanfics I see the same words used over and over. I thought I'd try using different words to recieve the same effects.

I have a specific purpose for my Power Rangers and that will become clearer soon, I've gone into detail on certain parts and on others I haven't on purposely because I noticed in a lot of fanfics you can get a clear idea of the story in the first chapter. In Naruto there are lots of details left hanging that you don't get information about till later chapters, I figured I'd try that approach and hopefully it works well.

The story should start moving a lot faster in later chapters, for now I want to set up my characters before making them move the story forwards, I will hope to have some romance later but I doubt Lemons, never tried em so I wanna at least get a feel for writing them before trying it in a long term project.

Also lastly if anyone cares I started (pretty much finished) writing a little one shot about a woman running away from her marriage, I will post it on FictionPress.net eventually and here too in a seperate thread. Also I will post the full story up on FF.net for you to read there because posting here is uber~troublesome and it will get me extra views and reviews.

Tell me what you thought even if you didn't read the whole thing and even if you don't like Naruto or haven't read/watched it because it's still writing as much as it is fanfiction.