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ELASHORTHYP 02-20-2008 05:42 PM
My 1st manga pg
 
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Attachment 4220please give me your comments to help me improve(>.<):pinkbow:
Im ok. at people but not good at backgrounds(- . -)

Gerard 02-20-2008 07:13 PM
does she bleed ???

anyhoo.. i like the eyes xD

chibiloli93 02-20-2008 08:02 PM
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Originally Posted by Gerard (Post 405307)
does she bleed ???anyhoo.. i like the eyes xD
No, (dis is my sis's manga)blood is dripping on her...

Gerard 02-20-2008 09:00 PM
ohh i see... I didn't see there was blood on the Walls and Roff..

Powermad147 02-20-2008 09:03 PM
Ok, collective criticism...I won't pretend to be an expert XD. BUT, I think the hand could use a little work, it seems sort of akward, like the fingers are longer than they should be, and strangely hunched over. Also, a clearer panel layout would be nice. but that aside, it looks great ^_^ keep up the good work!

chibiloli93 02-20-2008 09:13 PM
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Originally Posted by Powermad147 (Post 405476)
Ok, collective criticism...I won't pretend to be an expert XD. BUT, I think the hand could use a little work, it seems sort of akward, like the fingers are longer than they should be, and strangely hunched over. Also, a clearer panel layout would be nice. but that aside, it looks great ^_^ keep up the good work!
Can u go 2 chk out mine? i have a thread 4 it! Just look up threads started by me!


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