My japanese notes... Are they all in check?

[CanniblisticMushrooms]

Uhhh.... Here is some of my Japanese notes and I was wondering if they are all in check.

Suki: like
Karaoke Suki?: Do you like Karaoke?
Oishi: Yummy
Atsui: Hot
Atsui desu ne?: Its hot today isnt it?
Samui:Cold
Samui desu ne?: Its cold today isnt it?
Ogenki Desu Ka?: How are you?
Ganbatte: Go for it!
Honto?: really?
Daijyobu?: Are you okay?
Shitai!: I wanna try!
Tsukareta: Tired
Nani: What?
Tanashii!: Fun
Omoshiroi: Interesting
Owarii: The end

So are they all right? Please let me know. ((Sorry for typing so much))

[Paul11]

Originally Posted by CanniblisticMushrooms

Uhhh.... Here is some of my Japanese notes and I was wondering if they are all in check.

Suki: like
Karaoke Suki?: Do you like Karaoke?
Oishi: Yummy
Atsui: Hot
Atsui desu ne?: Its hot today isnt it?
Samui:Cold
Samui desu ne?: Its cold today isnt it?
Ogenki Desu Ka?: How are you?
Ganbatte: Go for it!
Honto?: really?
Daijyobu?: Are you okay?
Shitai!: I wanna try!
Tsukareta: Tired
Nani: What?
Tanashii!: Fun
Omoshiroi: Interesting
Owarii: The end

So are they all right? Please let me know. ((Sorry for typing so much))

Karaoke GA suki

[Saikou]

Overall very good! Just a few things.

Tanoshii

and if you wanted to say "It's hot / cold today isnt it?" it'd be "kyo wa atsui / samui desu ne?"

[Seiryuu]

EDIT: For the 2 "I's", they're at the end of oishii.

[james1254]

Originally Posted by CanniblisticMushrooms

Uhhh.... Here is some of my Japanese notes and I was wondering if they are all in check.

Suki: like
Karaoke ga Suki desuka : Do you like Karaoke?
Oishii: Yummy
Atsui: Hot
Atsui desu ne?: Its hot isnt it?
Samui:Cold
Samui desu ne?: Its cold isnt it?
Ogenki Desu Ka?: How are you?
Ganbatte: Go for it!
Hontou: really
Daijyobu desuka: Are you okay?
{Shitai!: I wanna try!}(saying you want to try something depends on the thing you want to try, this currently says you want to do )
Tsukaremashita: Tired
Nan desuka: What?
Tanoshii!: Fun
Omoshiroi: Interesting
Owari: The end

So are they all right? Please let me know. ((Sorry for typing so much))

I put everything to the same level of politeness and corrected some of them but i might of missed something.

[Nathan]

終わり　(owari) should have but one "i"

[Paul11]

Originally Posted by Seiryuu

EDIT: For the 2 "I's", they're at the end of oishii.

Please explain to someone who is barely computer literat, how did you make this cool page and put the diagrams on the quote?