Help with grammar (paragraph about family)
 

hello!

So i will have to write a short paragraph in japanese about my family and I would like to know if the grammar is correct.

Watashi no kazoku wa 4-nin desu. Chichi to haha to imooto to watashi desu. Watashi no kazoku de chichi ga ichiban toshiyori desu. Chichi wa 59-sai desu. Mae chichi ga ichiban takaku nakatta desu. demo ima watashi wa chichi yori takai desu. Haha wa imooto to onaji gurai takai desu. Imooto no namae wa Laura-san desu. Imooto wa Helsinki ni imasu. Chichi to haha wa Tampere ni imasu.

Thank you in advance.

Can you not type in Japanese? There is a thread on how to set it up on this forum near the top.

1. You don't need to use "wata(ku)shi" as much as you do. Japanese avoid pronouns a lot. I can't say about Finnish, knowing only the word "Suomi" in the language, but in Japanese they aren't that important. For example, sentence #1 should just be 家族は４人です。 No need for 私 at all.

2. When saying "out of all of my family, my X is tallest" you would say 家族の中で not 家族で.

Thank you for your answer. I have just started my studies so currently I know romaji better and I haven't even learned any kanji yet.

Writing in Japanese is the best way to get help on this forum.

Once you have at least hiragana down come on back and ask.

I read online. (Link : Family)
chichi = my father
okaasan = someoneelse/your father
so it doesn't have to use 'watasi no kazoku de chichi', which is quite long for me.
is it right or wrong ?

目が痛いよ！日本語だけ下さい

メイービ ラーイト ライク ディース？

(Don't shoot me people, just kidding).

I'm not entirely sure what you're getting at, but おかあさん does not mean "your father."

And in the vein of Chryuop:

:eek: I knew under that black "dress" there was something hiding...well better missing LOL

I served with your fath- mother in the Clone Wars.