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Lyrics Translation - 12-22-2009, 12:48 PM

Hello there!

I would greatly appreciate if someone could translate this into English for me, please.

I don't exactly mind if you take some creative liberty, I would just like a clear translation.

The best I came up with was far too literal and made it uncomfortable to follow. No need to worry about making it singable in English either. Thank you so much!
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怯える振りで待っているから 考えるより体で教えて
小さな舌が描くのは 炎の呪文「I love you, more!darling. 」

永遠に残るように深く 心を引き裂いて見せて
小さく指が抉る時 痛くして「Ecstasy deep in my Body」

私を月まで連れて行って 暗い闇も恐れないよ
ソレがあればアノお薬よりもっと飛べるの
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12-22-2009, 03:37 PM

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I would greatly appreciate if someone could translate this into English for me, please.

I don't exactly mind if you take some creative liberty, I would just like a clear translation.

The best I came up with was far too literal and made it uncomfortable to follow. No need to worry about making it singable in English either. Thank you so much!
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怯える振りで待っているから 考えるより体で教えて
小さな舌が描くのは 炎の呪文「I love you, more!darling. 」

永遠に残るように深く 心を引き裂いて見せて
小さく指が抉る時 痛くして「Ecstasy deep in my Body」

私を月まで連れて行って 暗い闇も恐れないよ
ソレがあればアノお薬よりもっと飛べるの
I usually don't do song lyrics. I won't do another until next Christmas! I'll try not take almost any creative liberty, either.
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I'll await you in a feigned fright
Don't lecture, teach me with your body
Your little tongue paints the fiery spell
"I love you, more!darling."

Rip your heart out and show me
So I'll remember forever
Hurt me as your finger hollows me out
"Ecstasy deep in my Body"

Take me all the way to the moon
I fear not the darkness
This gets me higher than that drug
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12-22-2009, 03:39 PM

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I usually don't do song lyrics. I won't do another until next Christmas! I'll try not take almost any creative liberty, either.
__________

I'll await you in a feigned fright
Don't lecture, teach me with your body
Your little tongue paints the fiery spell
"I love you, more!darling."

Rip your heart out and show me
So I'll remember forever
Hurt me as your finger hollows me out
"Ecstasy deep in my Body"

Take me all the way to the moon
I fear not the darkness
This gets me higher than that drug
Thank you so very much!
Merry Christmas! :P
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12-22-2009, 05:20 PM

What is this song called?




Perhaps stars fall, just as the rain

Until they burn on a windowpane

The grief of loss no written place

It is simply painted, on my face.
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12-23-2009, 01:06 AM

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What is this song called?
It's called "Fly me to the moon." Fly me to the Moon

Don't bother listening. It is quite possibly the worst song ever written. And I am including the song entitled "pulling your teeth with a doorknob and some wax paper."
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12-24-2009, 06:50 AM

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It's called "Fly me to the moon." Fly me to the Moon

Don't bother listening. It is quite possibly the worst song ever written. And I am including the song entitled "pulling your teeth with a doorknob and some wax paper."
Fly me to the moon? Obviously not the same version by Frank Sinatra and Megumi Hayashibara... aka Rei Ayanami, right?




Perhaps stars fall, just as the rain

Until they burn on a windowpane

The grief of loss no written place

It is simply painted, on my face.
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12-24-2009, 01:51 PM

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Fly me to the moon? Obviously not the same version by Frank Sinatra and Megumi Hayashibara... aka Rei Ayanami, right?
Nowhere near the same song.
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