Check this translation, please
 

Hi! I've found this phrase:
ライフストリム、それは星と星に生きる全ての源です。
I guess it means:
Lifestream: this is the source of everything who lives on the planet and of the planet itself.

I'd like to slightly transform this phrase in order to say:
Lifestream: this is the source of the life of everything who lives on the planet and of the planet itself:
ライフストリム、それは星と星に生きるの命の源です。
Is it right?

ライフストリム should be ライフストリーム.

who > that

生きるの命　＞　生きる命　＞　生きる全ての命

Eheh..I make mistakes also in eneglish :D

Thank you!