Does this translation make sense? please help

[katanne92813]

Hi,

I am taking Elementary Japanese 101 at university and I am doing a presentation were we need to talk in Japanese... I was wondering if the following Japanese sentences make sense and if not how can I fix them?



ラディッシュをつかって、ラディッシュをきって、それ からつめたい水にひたします。Slice radish into thin slices and soak in cold water.

ラディッシュをつかって、くきおきります。Cut out the stem of the other radish.

ラデッシュのうえにせいほうけいをきりとります。cut a square into the top of the raddish

せいほうけいのまわりにすりっとをきります。ラデッシ ュのそくめんしたにすりっとをきりっます。racut slits around the cut out square. Repeat down the radish.

すりっとにすらいすをいれます。Place the sliced pieces into the slits.

[katanne92813]

...anyone?