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NatsuNatsu 12-12-2007 08:51 PM

O_O That's even better! Thank you Moodaddy! <3333

NickVelvet 12-13-2007 02:15 AM

That looks great. Your shading is quite nice. I have to agree with Moodaddy on the looking like she is running. Although the more you look at it with the one bird at calf level you get a small sense.

You would maybe need to show the rest of her right foot, and maybe position her higher up. Where the blue meets the white area creates a horizon line, which is were you get the confusion. A lower horizon line or separation would give more of a flying fee along with carrying the blue down farther. Also with the lines of the clouds running across the page. Id break them up a bit. l. Hope that made sense.

The sky looks good I think. If you look at a clear blue sky you will notice it is darker above and graduates into a lighter blue.

Excellent work.

NatsuNatsu 12-13-2007 09:33 PM

Thank you again, NV! I love all your crits and comments ><

I will have other contest entries to show you all soon, so please check up from time to time!

NickVelvet 12-14-2007 01:43 AM

Glad that myself and others could be of some help. I look forward to seeing some more of your work.

miyavikuun 12-14-2007 01:44 AM

omg man you are really good i suck at backgrounds but you are spuer good there is no reason that you should lose

Moodaddy 12-14-2007 02:38 AM

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Originally Posted by NatsuNatsu (Post 324451)
O_O That's even better! Thank you Moodaddy! <3333


you drawing makes me wanna go draw something again *sigh* now i suppose i must, i always got into bad moods if i didn't draw when i felt like i should ^^

NatsuNatsu 12-14-2007 07:55 PM

I'm so happy to help ><

Draw draw DRAW!

Then go out and buy my manga when I get it published >:3

Hoshichan 12-14-2007 08:05 PM

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Originally Posted by NatsuNatsu (Post 324436)
Thank you NV! Your wish is my command!

Here she is, new and improved, colored and done...She was supposed to be in the sky...but when I showed my mom, she got a little confused and thought she was on the ground. She gave me some bad advice and told me to darken in the top with gray...Once I did it...I feel I ruined it...But Imma submit it this way anyway ;-;

Does she look like she's in the sky?




I'm trying to improve on the way I color ><

*squeeeee*
thats beautiful !

NatsuNatsu 12-14-2007 09:00 PM

You like it?

Took me forever! I just hope I win...I really like the rain boots >:3

Hoshichan 12-14-2007 09:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NatsuNatsu (Post 326082)
You like it?

Took me forever! I just hope I win...I really like the rain boots >:3

I wish I
could color like that :rheart:
T__T


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