Opnions on my story?

[Kyousuke]

Im drawing a story and i wanted to know if it would be interesting before i put effort into drawing it. I left a post on here called "Red Oni" about another story. but i want to do a story in the same universe as that story. about a boy who's family was killed and he goes after the gang that killed them. after he finds them and kills them he finds out his sister was with them. she was taken prisoner then she began taking care of them. because the hero gets the wrong idea he kills his sister and then hecuts his head off. I want to add the appearance of one of the main characters from the Main Red Oni story named Shinzo. He would be the one who was hired by the gang to kill his family but after being paid he would leave. i thought this premise would be good and make it into a two chapter series, maybe even three. but if i could get some opinions about it then that would really help

[NaruNaruChan]

i would read it