I was being funny:rolleyes:

May i try?

I sing sound of brittle melody
When you lay there i couldnt hear your heart beat
Did you leave me?

Why...?

I hold hand that turns so cold
I want to hear your voice once again
It’s ok to sing sad song with me
As long i can still feel your breath in my face.

But it just a dream, and you know that........
Cause you’re a step away from the place you stand now
And i couldnt hold you for not leaving

My last song, i would sing a Goodbye.......

Goodbye...

I like it!!!
Here's a short one:

CLOSE THE DOOR
_______________



Close the door
turn out the light
No one is
here anymore.
Smile and wave
say I had a good time
say goodbye
close the door
turn out the light- Mitcheru Lee

Urk - awkward moment

Sorry.

S'OK!:ywave:

this is a song i wrote. i hope youu all like it!
its called.....

Your not,
the only one,
who stares out that window,
your not the only one.
Who thinks that they should go,
go away forever.....
Don’t!
Take your life,
its not that bad,
just open up your eyes!
Don’t!
Forget those things,
that were so dear to you,
that’s what,
you should be living for,
a happy ending......
is all your waiting for.

Don’t run and hide,
Behind that the smile that’s always on your face,
You’re hurting yourself,
I’m afraid for you,
You’re a coward,
Or you wouldn’t have told me,
That everything is going well.


I’m here to save you,
And get you out of that dark hole,
I’m here and I won’t leave you.
Don’t throw away what you always stood up for.
Ill fix your crown you once wore so proudly,
And ill place it on your head.
Those wings that you have will be white once again.

Im hear to save you,
Your not the only one,
Who stares out that window.
And wish that wernt here,
Ill never lie to you,
Ill always be near.
Don’t take your life away,
Its not that bad,
All you have to realize this,
Is open up your eyes…..


Ur not the only one,
Ill save u from ur past,
Things like time are never meant to last.
Ur going down a dark path,
Full of misery and despair,
I cant follow,
I wont go down there.
But if I have to,
Just to bring you back,
Then ill wander that road,
Until I prove to you wats meant to last.

U complain about so much,
U cant look anyone in the eye,
Yet for some reason I can tell u don’t want to die.
U just just think that’s wat everyone wants,
Its not,
So put down the knife,
Turn and go down the other road,
The one where u were so scared to go.
Ill be waiting at the beginning,
Ill be waiting to tell you im proud of you,
So meet me there,
Ill be waiting,
I promise,
So even you can see,
How special you are to me.

He lives in a boring community.
Waiting for time to fly.
Nothing more to say about.
His very boring life.
He's home schooled and only 13.
What's that? He's me!


^_^ I know it's a little boring XD

Very powerful and uplifting!

Yes. I agree.

thank you! everyone else said it was very good yet very dark.....but thanx!!!!^_^