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chaseme 05-02-2008 03:13 AM
My manga first draft
 
Ive been working on my manga and have finish 11pages of drafts
I want to know if the flow of events is understandable by other people or not.

please don't mind the crappy dialogs and art. I already know they suck:D

Perspective and panel layout suggestions are welcome

chaseme 05-02-2008 06:02 AM



Chapter 2

zubakusugar 05-02-2008 08:58 AM
I think the flow is great, and you've variation with the perspectives. Just one thing is that you almost got the same panel-style through the second chapter, could look more nice if you varied them as you did in the beginning. Nice work!

swords 05-02-2008 11:29 AM
haha so funny

SamuraiAlchemistNinja 05-02-2008 11:59 AM
Nice work! I think it's cute and funny! =)

chaseme 05-02-2008 01:09 PM
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could look more nice if you varied them as you did in the beginning. Nice work!
thx for the comment now that you mention it, my first chapter i made by panel layouts and adlib on the dialogs in my second chapter i wrote the dialogs and adlib on the panel layout.
will be working on my 2nd draft as soon as i get used to my genius graphic tablet.
***on a side note dont get genius graphics tablet. worth 1/3 of wacom bamboo but the performance really s***

Tsuyako 05-02-2008 04:01 PM
That was really cool :D keep it up!

zubakusugar 05-03-2008 11:21 AM
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Originally Posted by chaseme (Post 480148)
Added missing page 7


thx for the comment now that you mention it, my first chapter i made by panel layouts and adlib on the dialogs in my second chapter i wrote the dialogs and adlib on the panel layout.
will be working on my 2nd draft as soon as i get used to my genius graphic tablet.
***on a side note dont get genius graphics tablet. worth 1/3 of wacom bamboo but the performance really s***
aha ^^
i've got a wacom tablet intous (A4 something) and it was truly worth the
money. But the smaller ones are just as good as the bigger in my opinion.

MissMisa 05-03-2008 11:23 AM
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Originally Posted by zubakusugar (Post 480997)
aha ^^
i've got a wacom tablet intous (A4 something) and it was truly worth the
money. But the smaller ones are just as good as the bigger in my opinion.
I really wanted an Intous one but too expensive for me ;_; I have a Bamboo, I used to have the old Volito 2! When I get better though, I'm planning to invest in a better one ^_^

Oh and your Manga is great Chaseme! Very funny and great characters and camera angles :D

zubakusugar 05-03-2008 11:32 AM
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Originally Posted by MissMisa (Post 480998)
I really wanted an Intous one but too expensive for me ;_; I have a Bamboo, I used to have the old Volito 2! When I get better though, I'm planning to invest in a better one ^_^

Oh and your Manga is great Chaseme! Very funny and great characters and camera angles :D
yeah they're >< I regret a little that I bought the A4 one, because it's too
huge to bring along when I travel etc. I would recommend the A5, because
it has the same functions as the A4, but are smaller and more practical.
(and much cheaper) :3


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