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From the Darkness

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Note to readers:
These characters come from a real life relationship with a twist of darkness and interesting plot lines made up for your reading enjoyment. There is love, lust and war that threaten this love of two people. The series that I am writing is called Scottish Temptation for the point that the main male character tempts a young beautiful women into loving him even if she is pure evil.

Rating: R
This has sexual conitation to it and there will be a lot of bloodshed.

"From the Darkness"

Scottish Temptation
By: Christina Frederick-Schueler

Prologue
Life before Draven

The Samui family lived in Japanese weathly section of town. The time period was 1509 and something was happening to the Samui family late at night. Their mother gives birth to them in the evening at midnight. The first twin comes out and they give her the name of Mitsukai and then her twin sister comes and her sisters name is Suki. After birth the twins are taken to be cleaned and watched over. Lord Samui knew that there would be something about the twins that one would die and the other would be turned. So the everything happened as Lord Samui forsaw, the murder of his daughter; Suki by a vampire and Mitsukai's survival but curse life that befell her was the mark of a vampire. Mitsukai was found by a Japanese man named Lord Urusai. Mitsukai was trained to defeat the evil that took her from her home and to revenge for her sisters death. On the day her sister was murdered, Lord Urusai took her to her brother's home to live.On that day her older brother, Yoshi found her hidding in his house and took his baby sister in. Kyru came home to find his brother and sister home and safe. Yoshi and Kyru became rivals after their sister were taken from them. Getting along is not longer in their vocabulary.
In 1609, Mitsukai was taken by her adopted father, Lord Urusai put on a ship and her brothers stayed in Japan. Lord Urusai told his adopted daughter that she would stay with the Lockharts and she was to keep her distance from the Scottish men. She is to wed Rika Lockhart and keep her distance from Lord Geodie Draven. Very soon her father will find out that she will end up marrying Lord Draven instead of Lord Lockhart because she falls for Draven. So the long trip is underway to Scotland, the seas rock the boat and Mitsukai must stay in the underdecks of the Japanese ship.

Chapter 1-The Arrive in Scotland
When Mitsukai arrived and stepped off the ship Rika meant her and took her to his keep. Rika took Mitsukai to her room in his keep as he went downstairs to talk to his father, Gaven Lockhart. Mitsukai walked around the room taking off her traveling clothing then she took out her sword give to her by her adopted father. Then she began to clean her sword for a fight that she had with her family enemy. Having been raised by a vampire he taught her to hate her enemy. Suddenly the room grows dark and a blue portal opens up and Mitsukai vanishes from her room. When she finally hits ground with a hard thud she winces and gets up to her feet and heads for the closest town. Finding out that the people are dressed much different from her, dress which is a kimono of red with dragons on it which is a sign that she is unmarried in her country, the Scottish people are dressed for the women in dresses and kilts for the men. Mitsukai walks into a bar where men are enjoying themselves and several think that she is sexy enough. Some of the men descide to try to hit her in the butt which cause Mitsukai to grab their hands and brake their fingers. She thinks to herself after doing that.
"What the hell am I doing here?"
Mitsukai Urusai walks through the bar looking for her next kill having a feeling that she is being watch by a man. She had honed her skills to hunt but not fall in love ever again for her early life as a young girl was filled with too many loves that had all died and left her alone in the world. Men were getting drunk around her and some where pinching her in the butt and she just ignored them looking for the perfect man. Then she saw him, his dark brown eyes where on her watching her from the corner of the room. As she looked at him she saw the young tan face with smiling brown eyes and brown short cut hair and a blue plaid kilt around his waist and draped over his shoulder. Her fangs grew inside her mouth at the sight of him, lust filled her for she had not had sex within 200 years and she was one of the older vampires about 200 years old. She had traveled to Scotland for protection from her waring brother and to find her new mate. Now that she was here in Scotland searching for the man that would win her heart and soul. She walked over to him offering him a drink then sat down next to the man admiring the hard muscles. He looked at her listening to her sweet voice talk to him. He admired her soft curves of her body, looks at those soft beautiful lips that make him look hungry to kiss them. The night was young so Mitsukai talked until it was about 1am in the morning and then she had to disappear to go get her medication from her father so that she could come out doors during the day. Mitsukai's evolution has begun and has the powers to walk in the sun, she is now what is called a Phoenix. Mitsukai's world was very difficult for her. Mitsukai was born into the world of being an orphan born and she was getting use to being alone. Lord Draven, a well muscled man, with brown eyes, Raven colored hair, was watching Mitsukai as she moved away from him and disappeared. Mitsukai did not seem to be from his country at all, she was too bold in the way that she carried herself. Mitsukai carried a weapon that women of his time would not. The women to him were suppose to not be warrior and her strong headness made him worry some.
After Mitsukai got her meal and sex with the gorgous stranger that she had no idea was Lord Draven, she returned to Lord Lockharts keep to deal with getting rid of Lord Lockhart so that she could be free to do what she wanted. She decided to run away from Lord Lockhart and look for this lovely dark haired Scotsman who she had just met that night.

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Chapter 2-The Woods
It was a bright sunny day and Mitsukai was down by the creek playing in the water. Lord Draven was riding by and heard a woman’s voice and stopped his horse got down and went to find the woman. He found her and stayed in the bushes and watched her. The beautiful creature had caught his eye a month ago. Suddenly, Mitsukai turns to see Lord Draven watching her. The eyes of Lord Draven scan her for interest that he find with her walking towards him. Scars mark her body from the battles she had when she was mortal. As he comes close to her scent goes to his nose and his body reacts to her growing hard in his groin. She wraps her arms around him and looks into his eyes. He gets a feirse need to kiss her and as he leans down to kiss her, her lips gently brush his sending a wave of lust straight to his groin making him groan. The love making took hours and they were both starting to fall for one another after a couple hours. The sex had happen where she was leaning up against the tree so he could have sex with her and enjoy her. Mitsukai's beautiful breast and long black hair had made her so attractive to him. Mitsukai put back on her clothing and walked to her horse.

"I will see you tonight, milord."
Mitsukai rode off into the woods to her home, while Draven headed home to get the party ready for tonight. Mitsukai got dressed for the ball in her best dress of red with black lace which she was not use to wearing at all. Mitsukai wanted to be in her kimono at the ball instead of this dress. Mitsukai was taken to the ball on horse back by another vampire who had now taken her in and encouraged her indepentance and wanted her to have a lover other than another vampire.
Chapter 3-The Ball
When the sun set everyone started coming to the ball. Mitsukai was among the first to arrive and looked gorgous in her red dress with black lace on it. Music was playing in the Scottish tones. Mitsukai had weird feeling that she did not understand any of the words for her English was still struggling for she had lived in Japan since she was a baby.Draven and Mitsukai dance together for over an hour before dinner is served and they sit across the table from one another. Mitsukai is asked about Japan and what has brought her to Scotland. Mitsukai answers that she had to come to get away from danger and to protect her brothers. Mitsukai explained that her sister had been murdered by a man wanting revenge on her father for some of his deeds. Lord Urusai adopted me then sent me hear to Scotland to get away from her brothers and to find a new life. Without thinking much Mitsukai was speaking in Japanese and forgot her English completely. Lord Draven looked at her giving her a signal that she was forgetting to speak English. Mitsukai blushed and repeated the sentence in broken English.
After dinner the dance began up agian and Mitsukai dance with Lord Draven and some other single party guest. Lord Lockhart was at the part and so was her father who was happy his daughter was having fun. Lord Lockhart danced with her and told her in harsh words that she was coming home with him and he would not let her marry a man like Draven because he would not be loyal. Mitsukai excused herself and went to her father and told him to follow her.
"Anata wa chikara dzuki saitai hitobito. Watashi wa bekarazu suki hitobito," said Mitsukai.
"Watashi wa ketsubou anata wa chikara hitobito kara anata wa onna no hito," said Lord Urusai.
"Nanitozo Daifu. Watashi wa bekarazu ketsubou dzuki," said Mitsukai upset and crying.
"Fain onna kodomo. Anata wa saitai Lord Draven," Lord Urusai took his daughter out to dance with her after he had his last words.
Draven watched the father and daughter dance he had over heard the arguement and hoped the father would let him marry her instead of Lockhart for he believed Lockhart would end up hurting her. Draven walked out to dance with Mitsukai and Lord Urusai handed her over without a fight as Lockhart planned a way to get her. Lord Draven at the end of the dance lead Mitsukai infront of everyone that night and told everyone that he would be marrying Mitsukai and be her faithful husband. Lord Draven said that they would be retiring for the night as Mitsukai loyal looked down at the floor not making eye contact with any of the men. Lord Draven took Mitsukai up to his room and he was shoed out so that her servants could get her ready for bed. Mitsukai knew nothing of Lord Draven's customs so she followed the ones made by her country men. Mitsukai would soon be under the control of her husband and would have to obey him. Geordie came back in and got into bed as the father had instructed he made no move on her. Geordie would be wed in the Scottish way then the Japanese way tomorrow. Geordie knew that they would go live in Japan and come back to Scotland to visit for family parties which he hated. They both were clueless to the danger that was walking in the shadows. Their enemy was planning his next move to capture his bride from Draven before he found out that he had murdered her family and take revenge for his wife.
Chapter 4-The Kidnapping
Within the next weeks, Mitsukai and Geordie went horse back riding. That is when trouble hit, the forest was suddenly on fire and Mitsukai was thrown from her horse. That is when Lockhart walked up and grabbed her up and put her on his horse. Geordie search for her everywhere in the woods after the fire was put out and decide that this was one of Lockharts tricks to get what he wanted. Mitsukai had said that someone had hurt her father to get to her and Suki. Geordie now had an idea who had her and sent some of his men out looking for her. Mitsukai layed in the dark tent with Lockhart looking at her hungryly. Lockhart twore off her clothing to get ready to rape her but was distracted when one of his men needed his help with something. Geordie and his tracker were coming upon the Lockhart camp to serve justice to Lockhart for the murders of Mitsukai family. When Lord Lockhart left the tent to get something, Lord Urusai sneaked in and freed his daughter giving her katana so that she could fight her way out. Yoshi, Kyru, Lord Urusai, Geordie and his trackers fought there way out of the camp with Lord Lockhart as a captive back to the keep for a proper trial and putting to death. Mitsukai rode with Geordie, she was tired and feeling sick at the time signalling she might be pregnant with Geordie's child. When they got home Geordie took her up to their room and put her in his bed then he layed down with her holding her.

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