ok....one more before good night....it's a little creepy...

His Eyes

His eyes
They watch me
His face
It stalks me
His name
It haunts me
His ears
They hear me
His nose
It smells me
His hands
They feel me
His voice
It calls me
His arms
They take me
His kiss
It wakes me
His breath
It saves me
His body
It shakes me
His eyes
They kill me

It is creepy but I like it :D

ok, here's a new one...

Write Me A Story

Write me a story
A story of tales
Of boys on adventures
And women in veils

Write me a story
A story of love
Of lucious red roses
And beautiful doves

Write me a story
A story of tears
Of heart breaking sadness
And emotional fears

Write me a story
A story of long
Of wonderful music
And girls singing songs

Write me a story
A story of dance
Of marvelous miracles
And unknowing chance

Write me a story
A story of lust
Of sensual kisses
And the intimate us


what do you guys think of that one?

LAST GOOD BYE

Last good bye, silent night
Where the sun has taken its rays?
It hurts me to know that I must live only of memories
Without more to embrace than my own body,
Without more to wait than the passage of time
my first and great love
Gray Sky, sea without water, mourning sun, hidden moon, robbed Dreams,
Fragile dove, not able to fly with broken wings
Hopeless without knowing, if you ever loved me
Rain of November, tears in December,
Your lips touched mine, smooth and gentle
While your eyes were saying; this is a good bye
How was I going to know that it was the last time?
I did not know it, but I felt it
They say the most difficult kiss is the last one,
In which you give your soul, passion and heart
Now I understand, a flower is born, and soon dies
with a see you later, we said forever good bye

PAIN

I wake up in the morning
and all I feel is pain
I look outside the window
and all it does is rain

I feel like I am empty
there's a hole inside my soul
I just don't feel like I am me
I know that I'm not whole

There's something in me missing
It's gone and I don't know why
I wish that I knew where to look
Cause I'm losing my freaking mind

These voices they keep talking
they just won't go away
I wish that they would leave me
alone for just one day

I don't know how to help myself
believe me I have tried
please won't someone help me
before I commit suicide

I just can't do this anymore
it hurts deep down inside
and everyone keeps asking
to give them reasons why

I don't know what is wrong with me
if I did I wouldn’t be like this
I wish that I was happy
that's a feeling that I miss

I feel like no one likes me
and that no one cares
cause when I cry in corners
nobody's ever there

No one cares anyway
so I don't make a peep
I don't know what I'm doing
so I'll just go to sleep

I hope you like them!

ooo...I like them...very very well written...I like them alot...what do you think of mine?

they are very good. I like the very first one you wrote, I like it

Please, Dad

As soft winds sweep away the days
I look back on life through a haze.
Remember playgrounds, parks and friends,
In childlike gaze that never ends.
The laughter in a game of catch,
Shall memory ever attach...
To innocence in youthful eyes,
Catching the ball to Dad's surprise.

I recall my first bike, first wreck,
Who picked me up, said, "What the heck?"
Convinced me to give one more try,
While, knees skinned, I forgot to cry.
Just the joy knowing he was there,
Making him proud my only care.
There was nothing I couldn't do,
My heart held fast that to be true.

Though teenage years were kind of rough,
I sure wasn't too big or tough.
You taught me to defend what's right
And never back down from a fight.
So I learned the hard way to stand,
Still, with each lump, I found your hand.
Drawing from you an inner strength,
And stubborn pride of equal length.

But there the line of fate was drawn,
As though I blinked and you were gone.
I found myself facing the sun,
Not man, not boy, fatherless, one.
Eyes blinded by a void inside,
I could not live that you had died.
Alas finding it to be true,
I could do nothing without you.

Please, Dad, today just hear my call,
I'm sorry that I dropped the ball.
My life is wrecked, my knees are skinned,
My emotions undisciplined.
I can't get up although I try,
Please don't be upset if I cry.
Though I can't fight what I can't see,
Please, Dad, say you're still proud of me.

Got bored so I figured I would type up some poems.....lol

Walk Away From Me

Walk away from me
dry tears in my eye
I hate to watch you walk
Your footsteps make me cry

I know you will come back
But you're gone for way to long
I picture your face and feel your touch
Trying to make myself strong

Your steps echo down the hallway
They are all I can hear
But they are going away from me
Instead of coming near

I cry many tears of sorrow
The one's you cannot see
I hate to stand and watch you
Walk away from me

Another...

Falling Rain

Let the rain fall down
As we lie upon the ground
Let it clens our skin
Washing away our sin

We don't want to hear
The birds singing near
Let our lips taste
Kissing in beautiful haste

And may the misty air
Chill our bodies bare
Us moving as one
The rain still not done

Drops of cold wet
You can dry them, I'll let
And your sweet innocent kisses
I want them like riches

Our breathing's a hex
Our minds engaging in sex
Our bodies become whole
Giving life to our dead soul

And with one final kiss
All the time we've missed
A silence in the town
Please let the rain fall down



Oh, sooooo lustful....lol....tell me what you think...I like reveiws!

They're really great!! Good stuff mu mu! XD