I wrote a poem like that...it goes...

FLOWERS

ROSES ARE RED
VIOLETS ARE BLUE
I DON'T KNOW HOW
I SURVIVE WITHOUT YOU

TULIPS ARE YELLOW
DAISIES ARE WHITE
OH HOW I WISH YOU
WERE WITH ME TONIGHT

or something like such......lol

Lol, tulips are lots of different colors, Hisu.;)

Mu mu, great job, simple yet it speaks, thumbs up!:vsign:

Insane Nothing

Be there a method to my insanity?
As dark a closed closet door as any
A silent whisper of dead angel's breath
Filling the ear of no one listening
People walking but going no where
People with places to go and yet not going
The mourning of morning's sky
Falling to the depths of the earth
Freezing over but a hell
Killing it's fire like a horrorous murder
Pouring the blood to grow the weeds
That surround it all once again
In the darkness of a closed closet door
Be there a method to my insanity?


Krahe

In the dark, behind the trees
Across the misty lake
In the room, by himself
The darkness he shall take

Through the window, cold as ice
Lay the darkened day
There sits upon an old fence
Midnight black Krahe

The chill of death crawls high
Up the warm spine of man
The black Krahe begins
To cross the dead of land

The darkness of the room
Begins to fill his mind
Leaving but a body
A feast Krahe will find

He slowly slips away
No sign of Heaven's light
Just the shadow of death
A Krahe dark as night

Terrifying tapping
On window cold as ice
In the gamble of death
The Krahe has the dice

Shattering of the glass
Was the last thing to hear
He has finally gone
As Krahe pecks his ear

In the dark, behind the trees
Across the misty lake
In the room, not alone
The darkness Krahe ate



I was in an "Edgar Allen Poe" mood when I wrote this....lol

OMG! :eek: Wow! That's just stunning... I don't know what to say Mu... It's too good to comment upon!

I didn't know you write free verse as well. Great! BTW, why did you call it Krahe?

Because it is a different......"it gives it an edgy feel" -Jen (friend)......It is german for "crow" supposidly.....lol

Glad it didn't scare you! LOL!

Can't feel scared when you're around :D... You are superwoman after all :rolleyes:... nevertheless, I write a lot of dark stuff myself so I don't totally flip it when I read a poem that way :D (It's on the Insane dahlia thread if you wanna read it...though come to think of it, I have removed some of the earlier posts)

I gotta make a pick so I choose Krahe as my favourite! YEAH! It's very well written especially considering that if you don't know Krahe stood for crow, you could make a whole new interpretation of things :D

YEAH! Your right! OMG! I love you! But yeah, when i get around to it, i'll go check your's out....i love to read poems! But yeah, once again, glad you like!

Mu, what can I say. I love it! I love Krahe! I totally agree with Jen. I love you like woha!

YEAH! I LOVE YOU TOO DOLL! How was 6 flags? You missed one hell of a dance last night! Dare i tell you about silly Manny? lol!