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05-25-2007, 07:46 PM
Well I've been writing and I have two new poems, so here they are!!
Strenght My Love Be strong my love for our end is near Do not be afarid, do not shed a tear Time will make our hearts grow stronger Even if we are in the arms of another My love for you is full and undying Even at our deathbeds resting If my love for you is a mortal sin Then let my immortal life being So now grabs the bottle and let the love slip away Knowing that I'll see you again someday Oh Happy Dagger! the blade of the dagger is cold to the touch But I i have to end it right now I must this pain is unbearable, my life is too rough I really am done with this mask of tough Crimson red fills the page and turns to rage None of you shall ever read this page My world turns black with no turning back Time won't stop and it's not running back The blade of the dagger is cold tot he touch Oh happy dagger, I love you so much!  Life goes on. But I'm gone. Cause I'll die without you. </3 
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06-03-2007, 02:21 AM
Lonely Love
You’ll never know how I really feel How much you make my world shine bright Just a small smile from you makes me weak You make me speechless with a wink. My small confession of feelings for you Knowing you’ll never know what you do to me You give me hope when there’s none left Your warm smiles brings me joy and peace But we are in two different worlds Worlds separated by hate and lust And these tears fall because of my fears My fears of never being happy without you My trials and downfalls build Then I get a sharp, cold chill And the grim reality sets in And now I cry for your touch that will never come But we are in two different worlds Worlds separated by hate and lust And these tears fall because of my fears My fears of never being happy without you My trials and downfalls build Then I get a sharp, cold chill And the grim reality sets in And now I cry for your touch that will never come Life goes on. But I'm gone. Cause I'll die without you. </3
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06-03-2007, 11:50 AM
beautifull and sad... Just like black rose. I hope that all your darkness will be just wink of your eyes at the end, just like one black rose surronded by many colorfull ones.
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06-03-2007, 12:26 PM
umaaaiiiiii...
I felt very amusing reading your poem.. have you ever heard of " sen no kaze ni natte "? if i'm not mistaken, it is taken from an english poem -become a thousand wind- now it is being performed as a song by an opera-like japanese singer called akikawa masafumi..FYI, this song is very superb coz it has been in oricon chart top 10 for more than a year starting may last year.. cool eh.. it sound a little like this.. watashi no ohaka no mae de nakanai de kudasai soko ni watashi wa imasen nemutte nanka imasen sen no kaze ni natte ano ooki na sora wo fuki watteimasu Don't do drugs!  
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08-05-2007, 02:10 PM
SS, I have inside information (from you ^_^) that you've done some more writing in the recent past. If any of them are poems, I'd sure like to see them here! If they're not then write one and post it here ^^
 Omae mo kanjite no ka... kaze no koe?
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