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SweetSuicide 02-01-2007 11:08 PM

Poems
 
**These are some of my poems that I wrote. ENJOY!*

Stuck In the Middle

Stuck in the middle
Of a love that was good
And a love that could win
Praying time will end it all
But each day that love
Grows stronger each day
Scaring me more and more
Tearing out my heart and soul
Praying for a time of no more pain
But knowing it will never come
As I watch a love fall apart
I try to see a new love grow
But it could never work becuase of
Being stuck in the middle
Is the worst place to be...


A Ghost, A Memory
You never were really here
But when you were here
The whole world seemed ok
At times we talked of
Our dreams and long walks
Every time you left, I cried

And I never knew why
Dad said it was for school
But it couldn't be true
You only came home once
In a big blue moon
Now you've been gone
For far too long and
I'm left with a ghost
A memory of you…

*please let me know what u think!!*

Rikku777 02-01-2007 11:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SweetSuicide (Post 35033)
**These are some of my poems that I wrote. ENJOY!*

Stuck In the Middle

Stuck in the middle
Of a love that was good
And a love that could win
Praying time will end it all
But each day that love
Grows stronger each day
Scaring me more and more
Tearing out my heart and soul
Praying for a time of no more pain
But knowing it will never come
As I watch a love fall apart
I try to see a new love grow
But it could never work becuase of
Being stuck in the middle
Is the worst place to be...


A Ghost, A Memory
You never were really here
But when you were here
The whole world seemed ok
At times we talked of
Our dreams and long walks
Every time you left, I cried

And I never knew why
Dad said it was for school
But it couldn't be true
You only came home once
In a big blue moon
Now you've been gone
For far too long and
I'm left with a ghost
A memory of you…

*please let me know what u think!!*

So sweet and unique! I love em!!

Yuri 02-02-2007 12:24 AM

that was good, keep them up!

Hisuwashi 02-02-2007 12:26 AM

I love them, very sentimental :p

Yuri 02-02-2007 12:31 AM

hisuwashi knows I love to write poems, oh, hisuwashi, if you go on the fourm (my fourm) there is a thread called poems and stories, if you go there, there is the begging (intro only) about my story, if you wanted to know, I think there are some poems there too.

does anyone here want to hear some of my poems?

Hisuwashi 02-02-2007 12:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Yuri (Post 35067)
hisuwashi knows I love to write poems, oh, hisuwashi, if you go on the fourm (my fourm) there is a thread called poems and stories, if you go there, there is the begging (intro only) about my story, if you wanted to know, I think there are some poems there too.

does anyone here want to hear some of my poems?

I love your poems, and I'll check the thread. But I'm not going to show mine, not yet anyway :p

Yuri 02-02-2007 12:50 AM

I still have the one you wrote to me, its in my journal :rheart:

SweetSuicide 02-02-2007 12:50 AM

Hey.. Thanks you guys! I'm thinkin of putting more up soon but not yet. And I'd love to read ur poems Yuri. what's the thread?

Yuri 02-02-2007 01:05 AM

umm..well, its on another fourm. I will just post them here for you to read, unless you want to go to my forum.

Yuri 02-02-2007 01:06 AM

here is the link to 2 of my poems

- My poetry

I dont have time to accually write them here, but I will write what I can


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