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Poems for the soul
Hey Im Yuri, Im a old member of JF and I havent been around a lot, but when I was here I use to post my poems, but now that Im back I thought I should bring back a poetry thread!
You can feel free to comment on poems and post your own as well to be commented on! Simple rule though, if you have multiple poems to post place them all in one single post instead of individual posts, and no more than 10 posts a day from every user. ~Yuri Mocking Bird I once thought you as a sparrow *beauty in disguise* then a black beaked crow *disguise unknown to the eyes* now your just a mocking bird *we see you for who you are* entertainment on the go *even though the show is far from over we can see whats come to end* Stories Ive never told I’d like to think that when we were young We’d play games and find true love I’d like to think that when we got old We’d have plenty of stories to be told I’d like to think when I’m going to die The sky will rain for the earth will cry I’d like to see when I awake again That I’m in your arms lying in bed I’d like to hope when life passes me by That Id forever have you under the night sky <3… Grasping life Don’t let me fall Hands on these shards of glass I’d grab a piece and break inevitably This heart is weak but temptation strong Create a death that sounds like song Tear me open and see what you’d find A broken heart and shards of glass I told you to catch me but you laughed I cried blood and bled tears But silence is all you’d ever hear You knew I was sick Twisted was the fate I’d hate to remind you But now I’ts to late I loved you and you knew But I stepped on deaths doormat And was welcomed with open arms. Never forget You can’t forget the words You can’t forget the feelings You can’t forget the love You can’t forget the thoughts I can’t let go of the words I can’t let go of the feelings I can’t let go of the love I can’t let go of the thoughts All I want and all I needed All I felt and all I was thinking The words are stained into my mind The love is stained into my heart This rose you gave is stained into my hand And your face is stained into my memory Who am I? I’m walking death I’m a talking soul I’m the silent child I’m a loud troll I’m the fly in your room I’m the helpless all around I’m the one you’ve kicked to the ground I’m the one who makes no sound Starry nights Nights of night The stars are bright One world gone Left behind See the sky? I see stars See the moon? No just stars They are scars When the night was sad Takes it out on itself The scars were left The night was glad for now they were friends When the moon was gone The stars remained The night was glad And perfectly sane |
Thanks for posting this, I love writing poetry! If I may, I can contribute to this thread:
Two poems from my poetry class-- Remembering an Old Friend A brain freeze can kill someone. The mind rips with white noise and frigid snow, and you know what picture should pop out of the cereal box. It itches like an annoying wasp, evading the desperate grasp of your chilled fingers-- rubrubrub in aggitation, but it just stings harder, branding a hole. Throw in the flag, and like a runner caught at home base the outcome's not worth the trial and tribulation. You lift your head. Snow, leaves, cement, black Puma boots, leggings, wool skirt, a thick brown hide jacket, gloves--one clenched at the side, and one shaping your name-- Then her face, and she smiles. And, The warmest breath of July melts the snow into Strawberry-Kiwi Koolaid you two sipped while dangling your tiny feet over a whitewashed Sunday porch, grazing the nubs of cattails, the scent of raw spearmint burning the nose, long ago in Elementary school, before she told you she was moving to Alaska. ... Not Like Dad One of my X's is yours, right? Too bad the doctors didn't have a microscope to check that time. My thoughts, then, must be yours, since we both lived together for nine years, even though you worked most of the time and left afterward. The way I speak, surely, But I could never get that laugh down, with the chopped-up 'eheheh' like an evil Buddha. Well, how about my hair? It's darker than mother's, especially wet... But in the sun it devastatingly shines. My eyes! I have brown eyes! Yours are black and boxed in, though, and you always ask why I freed myself with contacts. But our skin, perhaps._________________Yes. Even though on one side it's lighter, it's brown on the other--on my arms, shoulders, and face. I think, sometimes, I am like you, even though you say whenever you see me, "How'd you get so white? Not like dad, eheheh." ... Thanks for sharing your poetry, looking forward to further promoting literary expression with you~! |
I really liked your two poems. :] I love writing poetry, I think Ill put some more up later that I actually have on my facebook :P
A part that stuck out to me the most was "One of my X's is yours, right? Too bad the doctors didn't have a microscope to check that time." I like it...it kinda gives me a good chill reading it :D |
Yeah, my professor told us to just enjoy writing, if it's not natural, it's forced, and that's no good. So a lot of my poetry is funny, light-hearted, but with an edge to it. ^_^ I'm glad you liked it!
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Incredible poetry sense, guys!
Glad to see you're up and posting again, Yuri. =) "just enjoy writing, if it's not natural, it's forced, and that's no good" Hear, hear. :) |
Psh like Ill ever go without a good poetry thread on here Coolnard :]
Heres one I wrote a few months ago: (Written along to the song ~ Cherish - Ai Otsuka ) Loveless Game Sometimes I wonder if life is a game move your pawn here and hope your still sane the dice they roll like the sweat on your face pray to the heavens that you'll win the race My baby dear the angels sing like the trumpet of life will softly ring play your cards right and maybe you'll see that life is exactly the way it should be Sometimes it seems the game should change often you wonder if things are in your range though in the end you'll realize your wrong and every day seems even more long Living away and so far apart has me alone with a hurting heart the warmth you gave me lasted as my mind wandered the farthest sea I'd wish to honestly cherish this friendship though I know it wont ever be that way for me this love I harbor creates craters in my being and the game I'll play with slowly die away Two steps back and await my turn this love I feel will slowly burn again the card of sorrow shows my life shatters and completely forebodes My pawn lost its course and now forever it shall remorse losing this game and enduring its shame The dice roll a lovely 4 my heart lands upon the floor skip a beat another perhaps life ever full of daunt traps You skip ahead and miss the gate that closes shut and seals my fate the tears wont ever let go things speed up even if forever slow Never forget those who care the love you had once to share I'll miss the feeling of being with you a feeling I felt by very few Never forget... I love you <3 |
Dreamers Dream Hold on it’s the end of the world There’s hope left yet The weak and the silent will rise against And the world as we know it will be on top of the universe Our life as we perceive it will be anew And the needles will fall to the floor For there is strength in us yet And we will show it for sure Sleeping Sleeping For we have nothing left worth fighting for We will sleep eternally upon the floor Dream keep the dream And it will make us worthy Stand up tall and show what your worth Running away wont solve our problems just give us more Keep telling yourself that you’ll stay alive Sweet dream at the contours of our mind It’s at the end of the world that we need to get to So we can defend our worlds and the ones we love Hold onto the world we are fighting for Never before we could let go Lets not make this the start of the ending show Its not enough to want more Fight together, defend me Dream dream its all a dream Wake up and find the needles upon the floor Kick them away now there’s no real way out |
love it girl!!!!!
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Two more! Let's keep at it! Thanks for the lyrical poems yuri! :P <3
And Still, be Still* One morning I was climbing true, the ground ashining bright with dew, and came upon a haughty sign, foretelling-- "Warning: Drop Ahead." As I was sure ahead was wise, that turning back would blind my eyes, to the prospects of the end, I heeded not the warning sign. But, The mountain steeped past all prediction, and beat the snares of my conviction, 'til at the summit I stopped - fearing air beneath my feet. And still, be still, staring down cavity fatal deep, cold wind biting so I should weep, holding fear and thrill at the end. And still, be still, lest phantom hand should push me over, or the kiss of greeny lover, swaying my feet to take a step. And still, be still, signs foretold ill, repulse the thrill-- should we die or descend the hill? *written in regards to my Economics class, after we talked about the collapse of the housing market, and the frantic "saving" of banks to avoid economic meltdown In and Out I wish you were making that sound while going into me, while feeling me-- between the sheets-- In and Out In and Out It was harmony. Not make-believe, it was ecstasy! So sweet the memory, I forgot completely the moment of your kiss is lost to me. Why can't you read between the lines-- Can't you see the best of me? The angry fiery love of my retreat, as you cheat with hands behind me. The feeling, the sweet sweet feeling, of her hair is fantasy-- a dream inside a dream that no remedy can unbind thee! You say "love me" I say NO with a rage-love that eats me inside and out with the motion of our bodies' heat, rolling soft feet with rough feet. And, You cry that sound I wish I could receive In and Out In and Out of her and then I understand. Love so sweet, it burns me. Thanks all, and let's get some more traffic up in here, yah! ^_^ |
wow guys:) your writings are realy beautifull! please,keep posting :)
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wow thats amazing..
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A long one this time! ^_^ Meant to be performed as Slam Poetry.
This is NOT a rhyme, not to a sing-song voice that says "Loooooove meeeeee!" because I TELL my story. NO Not an artificial "I'm too sad to cope, so I'll spit my words out by struggling to say what I mean to say by not saying exactly what I mean by meaning what I say only as long as I'm saying it"... NO Not a torn-out "I live in the ghetto and got abused by my girlfriend too many times, too many bullets in the head, so many times that I can't believe I didn't realize sooner" I've heard so many times I can't believe I'm still listening NO My life is not a beat from the street, not a sad expose of how I turned my life around, not the insanity of being a loner, unwanted, afraid, manhandled, passionate, creative-- All I am saying is I don't write poetry I've never seen the sun in the stars or the stars in the moon or the moon in your hair--but I CAN say it's been dyed too many times. So many, in fact, that it resembles the crater-strewn dried out surface of an uninhabitable rock. My story cannot be stretched out, blown up, used to float through the layers of the atmosphere, layers of belief, religion, living, dying, moral ethics, logical physics, wildly played out fantasies of a person who knows who they are already because I don't know who I am yet. Am I a Catholic-Jew-woman-person-lover-hater-fighter-follower-believer-skeptic-critic-dancer-singer-artist-- I can at least be that. But a poet...that's been overplayed too many times. I hear "Poetry" and I say, "Shit! Now this class is going to take ten times as long and make one-tenth the amount a' sense!" Rhymes, riddles, metaphors, between the lines, between the sheets, love, passion, understanding, hating, reasoning, the image of an image beyond an image behind an image of the man you sat down with on the bench while you were listening to your iPod and he was feeding the birds bread out of a paper bag-- God All Mighty have mercy on our souls! Cuz dat ain't my gig dawg. Thasnot how I roll. So where do I belong, if it's not with the poets? Am I even a person? Unable to express what I believe, my personality, my insanity, the reason for my existence, my persistence through life despite the constant crying of WHY WHY WHY WHY am I still alive? Dragging my feet through the marshes of humanity, the surrealism of reality, eternity of suffering through a poetry class without ending, a destination without a beginning, meaning in only what we mean, not what we say, constantly playing behind the covers of a lovers' bed with his (or her's) ex, only to find out later that your lover was also playing the same game, and you feel cheated, defeated, lied to, you're ready to take your own life with the blade of Juliet, but then you realize something! Your fingers grip the pen...shaking...afraid for eons about what you want to say...finally, you can say what you mean. Waste Land great Byzantium okay Arcadia intriguing Rent I like the idea Eternity Program in the making Sesame Street good for kids-- What the FUCK is up with South Park? Everyone around me everywhere is playing off these misguided spurts of idiocy and framing them as masterpieces--am I the only one who doesn't get it, AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO DOESN'T UNDERSTAND?! Left outside of a crowd born to take the world, live it, love it, and die in a rose-scented coffin with a violin playing soft sultry music in the background to the beat of 'I Kissed a Girl' and later 'See You Again'-- NO I don't want to write poetry. I want to write history. |
Not sure about the soul but I wrote this some time ago regarding/ WHAT HAPPENS to children!
IMPOSSIBLE CHOICE "To the father" How could you leave her, did you Ever Care Twas lies you whispered in her ear love just a game to pass the time till you were told Soon your baby you will hold Did you jump for joy? a dad you'd be oh no that's just a ploy A wedding? Help You've some place else to go "The Mother" so now she's left all alone Her parents threw her out what could a single woman do Now she's "Up the Spout" Social Services don't care "Have it adopted dear" they whisper in her ear The Mum to be tries here tries there but all alone she stays till in desperations thrall she screams "Oh God Damn you all" A Loving Couple are waiting dear for your precious babe A better life they'll give her dear Be sensible--sign here" So Now the dreadful deed is done. "To the Child" Goodbye my darling child Remember how I loved you as I held you in my arms No other choice was there for me No place to live-No Place to go No sort of life for You. your special parents will love you dear but not as much as I for every day that crashes past is one day less that I have spent with "You" my precious child. WHen you are grown, please understand I really had no choice my love for you a Painful sacrifice If in my place you stood What then would be your choice? |
very nice dogsbody! I liked how you addressed not only the mother and father, but also the child, answering an appeal for understanding by posing a new question, "What then would be your choice?" I think it's a very cool poem!
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thankyou
MuRaSaKiiNkI. It is basically about a woman having to give up her baby, because there used to be so much bigotry for single women to be pregnant- so many were forced to give up their baby's. either into the care system or to be adopted. Later when the adult child starts searching for his or her parent-- they can have much anger and misunderstandings. Many think that they just were not wanted, so grow up thinking bad thoughts about their mother especially. I believe in many of the States in America it can still be difficult to find out their roots-- some States still prevent them finding out. |
this was to my own mother-- I only knew her for three months at the end of the war------------ never seen her since and left it too late to search for her.
Mother Mum Billie Mother, did you ever care About the child you bore Discarded at the sign of War Was it convenient-- Hitlers threat Your child--she's weeping even now to think that you could so forget about the child you bore mistreated at the end of War Mother--did you ever dream ponder, wonder, make believe about the child you bore Mother did you Ever Love That plain rejected lonely child Even at the dawn of peace were you there to comfort her? Mother just how did it feel Waiting in that heaving crowd would your husband chuck you out The kid's not His, he'd shout and clout Mother were you really Scared to meet that nuisance of a brat just cos it's the end of war Mother did you hate her so That pale excited little girl Treat her badly for a while So when she'd gone You'd wear a smile out of sight---Out of mind Mother --was this true did you ever ever care about the child you bore Just before the fear of War Mother as the years rolled by Did you ever ever sigh long to see the woman grown Maybe even family Mother--its so sad to know you died alone No-one cared Mother I believe the price was paid When in your coffin you were laid Mother can you now forgive my anger, hatred through these years my search for you was just too late for you and I will never know Reunion on this earth So please forgive that child you bore For after all You gave her life Yes Her Precious Life Thanks Mum. |
this is not apoem but perhaps food for thought:
iT IS RAINING RAIN AND FEELINGS INTO THE EARTH AND THEY ARE TRODDEN DEEPLY SUBMERGED UNTIL THEY FLOW INTO THE ROCKS BELOW. THEY ARE LOST AMONGST THE FOSSILS OF THE CENTURIES. LONG FORGOTTEN AS IF THEY NEVER DID EXIST.NO MATTER HOW HARD WE RACE AND RUN TO HOLD THEM BACK WE WILL NEVER RETRIEVE THEM-- NEVER CATCH A GLIMPSE OF WHAT WAS TRUE OR WHAT WAS FALSE. WOULD A FISHING NET SAVE THEM FROM CASCADING INTO THE DEPTHS? A FISHING NET HAS TOO MANY HOLES, WOULD A MERMAID CATCH THEM AS SHE SWIMS GALLANTLY TO SNATCH AT THEM AS THEY DESCEND SO SWIFTLY INTO THE TORRENTS OF TIME. SHE WOULD NEED TO SWIM FASTER THAN IS POSSIBLE BECAUSE THOSE FEELINGS WISH TO BE LOST AND NEVER DISPLAYED TO A SOUL IN THE WORLD. HOW SAD IT IS.DID THEY HAVE A SOUL? PERHAPS ANOTHER SOUL MIGHT CATCH THEM BEFORE TOO LATE THEY ARE FOREVER LOST AND MANGLED. PERHAPS THEY NEVER DID EXIST. DO HUMANS EVEN EXIST OR ARE THEY TOO JUST A FIGMENT OF THE IMAGINATION THAT CAN BE SCORED OUT WITHIN A BLINK OF AN EYE. WHY BE BORN AT ALL? WHAT IS THE POINT OF ARRIVING ON THIS EARTH? IS IT ALL A CONTINUOUS LESSON THAT SOMEHOW IS NEVER LEARNED. WHAT IS A HUMAN BEING? WHY DO THEY EXIST? WHAT REASON CAN THERE BE TO ARRIVE ON EARTH AT ALL WHEN ALL THEY DO IS KILL EACH OTHER SOMETIMES WITH UNSEEN THOUGHTS THAT PENETRATE THE SOUL. IS IT NOT BETTER TO BE KILLED BY THE SWORD RATHER THAN THE HIDDEN SECRETS OF THE MIND. THOSE THAT TORTURE OTHERS BY THEIR ACTIONS OR LACK OF ACTIONS THOSE THAT HIDE THEIR THOUGHTS BEHIND A MASK. WHY ALL THE SECRETS? ROBOTS NEED NO FEELINGS BUT HUMAN BEINGS DO OTHERWISE THEY MAY AS WELL BE ROBOTS TOO. WHAT DID OSCAR WILDE WRITE? "AND ALL MEN KILL THE THING THEY LOVE BY ALL LET THIS BE HEARD SOME DO IT WITH A BITTER LOOK SOME WITH A FLATTERING WORD THE COWARD DOES IT WITH A KISS THE BRAVE MAN WITH A SWORD! SO DOES THIS MEAN THAT NO MAN SHOULD DARE TO LOVE ANOTHER? ONE CAN NEVER LOVE WITHOUT BEING HURT. IS IT SO MUCH EASIER TO SUPPRESS ALL FEELINGS AND JUST LIVE IN A VACUUM OF PRETENCE AND HAVE A BARBED WIRE CAGE SURROUND THE SOUL AND HEART? IS IT BETTER TO NEVER HAVE KNOWN LOVE AND LEAD A COLD BLANK EXISTENCE WHERE FEELINGS AND EMOTIONS ARE NEVER ALLOWED TO EMERGE OR TAKE OVER. BE LIKE A BLOCK OF ICE? PERHAPS BUT WHAT IS THE SAYING? "iT IS BETTER TO HAVE LOVED AND LOST THAN NEVER TO HAVE LOVED AT ALL." BUT THEN THAT MEANS TORMENT SO IS IT REALLY WORTH LOSING ONES HEART TO ANOTHER? IS THE AGONY AND PAIN WORTH ALL THE ANGUISH WHEN LOVE IS REJECTED? FOR THE ONE WHO LOVES? SHOULD THEY BECOME AS A WOODEN TOY THAT IS MANIPULATED BY OTHERS. iT SEEMS FOOLISHNESS INDEED. CAN THEY TAKE BACK THE LOVE THAT IS UNWANTED? WILL THE LOVED ONE EVEN NOTICE OR CARE? MOST LIKELY NOT. IS A WOMAN ALLOWED TO LOVE ANOTHER WOMAN? IS IT A CRIME? sorry this is all in capitals. I am unsure how to alter the font to lower case. |
A meeting
Note: I am.. pretty bad at poetry. But, this is one I did about a month ago anywayy. xD
Oh how embarrassing.. :o When we met.. I was oh so young. A mere thirteen And you? You were oh so old in my eyes. Sixteen But even though our ages, were so far apart. Even though our parents, Fought, Grounded, We never, never gave up our friendship. A blink of my eyes, we fell in love. A love I’d never felt before. One I never wanted to give up. One you never wanted to give away to another. Another blink, I’m fourteen. You give me lilies and chocolate. Soon enough, You’re seventeen, And our parents try to split us again. This time, we emerge, broken scarred and apart… Oh how I missed you, And I knew you missed me too. Winter, Spring, Summer, Fall, It all passes in a gaze, never remembering anything except for my heart, Aching for you One more blink of my eyes, you’re there, next to me kissing me softly, begging for forgiveness, And our hearts heal slowly as time passes. Slowly, our parents, Everyone, They all realize it. We need each other.. Now, We stand here. Embracing as we start our lives together again, just as we knew we would be doing years ago. Happy Anniversary, I told you we would be here.. ♥ Err.. tada? : D Comments? |
ahh thats absolutely beautiful> thanks for sharing with us.
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Thanks!
I actually thought it was bad, but okay. =3 Your poems are beautiful too. The one called "Mother Mum Billie", almost made me cry. I loved it. |
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Hello again, never was your poem anything but expressing your love. I thought it beautiful. thanks also for your kind comments. Let us see more from you. |
I saww my boyfriend todayy. He had a little puppy with him that he'd gotten from a homeless lady. One of it's ears was cut down, and it's tail was injured a bit.
It made me so sad, but the puppy was still so hyper and happy. So,, I wrote this. ♥ Don’t laugh! I cry out as they crowd around me. Stop! Tears fill my eyes as I crouch even farther down. Leave it alone! They refuse to leave, crowding even more. The tears spill over as I lay hunched over it, protecting the poor creature. It’s so defenseless! Leave it alone! A whimper escapes from beneath me, and a small scuffed up nose peeks out, sniffing all around. No! I cry out to it. Get back in! They’ll hurt you! It whimpers again, pressing against me, Shaking and shivering. Give it up girl, one say mockingly. It’s no use, another says. No! You can’t!! But,.. They take him anyway. My whole body shakes, My small innocent six-year old body. How can they do that to it? It’s just a puppy! And I lay there crying, hoping and praying the poor, Innocent thing, Will be okayy.. |
I hope it will be okay. what a lovely sentimental poem.
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Yea,, he says he will give it a good home, thank goodness. And I just noticed I tend to write in the same formatt. : D
Any poems from you that you'd like to share? |
I'll try to find some to put in tomorrow. Meanwhile Keep writing.
this is a very short one. Think of your friends Know their Love Wear it as a garland |
SItting on the top deck of a bus
From where I sit the sea could be just like a carpet the ripples like the tufts you tug when lying on the home hearthrug Patterns are cast from clouds above Unconstant, changing never true today the sea so calm defies, deceives for even on the calmest day It hides the turbulence below Just like the face of all mankind which blank serenity portrays 'Tis lies, for deep within that calm facade Lie terrors, fears, Man from his mind is never free It plays with him Just like the wild, the restless sea. |
SOCIETY
Society doth tell a man He must never ever cry Tho' weaker woman sometimes can Embarrassed it makes others sigh Emotion for to spy The deep relief--it cannot flow when harnessed. |
You led her on,
With lies and kisses. Now you betray her? Gonna leave her broken? Really? One sentence. And it was shattered. “Let’s take a break” And she knew it was done. You wouldn’t stay. You already acted so.. so.. distant. Slowly breaking down her walls. Slowly crushing the heart you held in your hands. God, why?! A month. Now the phrase has changed, but she’s expecting it. “I can’t do this anymore. Goodbye.” Did you know? With that one sentence, one fucking phrase.. She died that day. You killed her. She lived physically, but mentally? Emotionally? She was dead. A shell.. WHY? Why would you murder her? “I’ll never leave you. You’re my heart and soul” LIES! She never knew someone could be so skilled at lying. And now? She’s dead. Everything has been taken from Her. Hah.. After all.. no one can live without a heart. ------------------ Writtenn for a friendd who got hurtt. Gahhh I wishh I could get that guy. |
I thought I'd write a poem for your thread
I looked inside... nothing but dead. (sorry) There's a lot of talent and passion here. |
Is there a bridge wide enough to span the chasm between us? Are our different cultures too set to allow freedom between us. Is Time too short to work the miracle required to simply Bridge that Chasm. can we not free our minds to all possibilities or do we close the door for all time? simply give in to our former experiences, habits and culture. Soon T'will be too late, opportunities forever lost. Is it possible? what say You? I give my hand across that void -- will you take it? Or simply allow me to fall into its depths-- ALONE. You turning your back for ever which will it be? |
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FEELINGS.
Her hand, small, childlike, I long to enfold within my own, feel its warmth, . She is far from her own land in the Far East. Why do I long just to hold her tight and protect her from all harm? The softness of her tiny hand within mine gives me that closeness long forgotten. Her black eyes mysterious but warm; they make me gasp and long to disappear into their very depths. She has touched my very soul ALAS: Never can she be the one for whom I yearn Culture so vast between us No hugs allowed Or caring touch Lost and Helpless I retreat within, Back to the womb. |
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