Originally Posted by lpdirufangirl09 (Post 388269)

Courage______________________
she stands on the shore
watching the rise and the fall of the tide
alone and wearing her heart on her sleeve

the white tips of the wave reminds her
of the sparkle in his eyes
and the sunset is his smile
it makes her heart beat
the sand between her thin fingers
it is the way their hands interlaced
like the last time they said goodbye

she's walking towards the water
and the pain hurts a little more
she says, "it's so stupid", what she's doing this for

a sigh is released as she walks closer
the water is at her knees
she takes a leap of courage
and lets herself go

her body is screaming for help
her heart is saying "no,"
the air from her lungs has vanished
and it's starting to show

he stands on the shore
watching the rise and the fall of the tide
he regrets what he said to her
and wishes he had the courage to apologize

Originally Posted by Yuri (Post 388287)

wow...as a fellow poem writter im envious

Originally Posted by Yuna7780 (Post 389332)

I really liked your "my LOVE" poem. Is it okay I should it to my English teacher, as for we are going over poetry in my class? I think it's very pretty.

Originally Posted by AoshiShinomori (Post 390457)

I'm kind of curious about the rhyme scheme and meter in the courage poem. They seem to be a bit dispersed. It adds effect to the poem :rolleyes: Do you usually attempt rhyme schemes or do you prefer free verse?

Originally Posted by lpdirufangirl09 (Post 389339)

Sure! As long as i get credit of course. =] :vsign:

Originally Posted by Yuna7780 (Post 393072)

Well, it'd be a crime to do that. Anyway, my teacher knows I can't write poetry for shit nor like writing it, so there'd be no way to get around saying it's my work.:mtongue: