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Umm.... you could also so use a complex rhyme scheme... such as a certain amount of syllables per line, with each line rhyming!. All poems don't have to rhyme, but the ones that rhyme are more memorable! Take this one I wrote for an example!...
The lies, the truth. Deceit, the proof. Deceived by you. Stolen, my youth. Was I the fool, For loving you? What should I do? Abandon you? Try to pull through? Shed tears for you? I thought you knew That I loved you. I feel so used. Also confused. My heart's imbued A crimson hue. I must renew. I must pursue For the debut of me, post-you! |
aww its beautiful love.. i havent finished them .. no... but i will!
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haha. thanx jenn. i'm working on writing more but my inspiration is at an all time low. >< |
it happens
and btw reita NEVER dies |
haha yeah i know >< but, hell, whatever floats their boat. o.0 'Lost' was actually inspired my the Kodou pv =p |
wow i really like what you wrote.
and maybe i got an idea how about you try writing some songs or something. cause they are poems just with a different set up maybe you'll get inspired or something. idk just an idea maybe ill post some of my songs up on here. |
heya no aka_______________________
here, take a sip. sit and talk a while. as our laughter lingers across your drunken smile. you're mine now. i'll take your hand in mine and look into your eyes. build up a little trust. tell a few white lies. you're mine now. press your lips against mine. let's see whats up these stairs. use this bandana to hide your eyes. there's a surprise up here you're mine now. several moments pass. you're lying on the floor. gasping to catch your breath. i'm glad a locked the door. you're mine now. do you like how i painted the room? it's my favorite color, red. i think it just screams 'you'. too bad you're dead. you're mine now. i get to keep you forever. a pretty memory in my head. i see you everywhere. you surround me as i lie in bed. you're mine now. |
we are worlds apart.
perfect strangers to each. i feel something from you. but you're too far to reach. as you walk beneath the moon, my sun is beaming, bright as can be. i see you when i dream. do you ever think of me? |
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