English freestyle Haiku thread - Page 6

Excessum · (#51 (**permalink**))

feeding my fears
thinking about us
running away

Fyer · (#52 (**permalink**))

Bright-lit skies,
Versus moon-lit nights,
Caresses of another- held on tight.

Acidreptile · (#53 (**permalink**))

You tried to recognize the signs
To avoid another mistake
It was useless

Excessum · (#54 (**permalink**))

Quote:

Originally Posted by Acidreptile

You tried to recognize the signs
To avoid another mistake
It was useless

nice, you are definitely progressing! ^^

like meteor
you passed me by
and left my heart willing

Alastor · (#55 (**permalink**))

I always thought Haiku was strictly 5 syllables, then 7 syllables, and then 5 again. But after some quick searching, apparently non-Japanese Haiku is, as said in the first thread post, a maximum of no more than 3 lines and 18 syllables. Anyway, writing something quick here.

Mountain with fire
A blue as clear as water
Amidst winter's cool

Shaelyn · (#56 (**permalink**))

Quote:

Originally Posted by Alastor

I always thought Haiku was strictly 5 syllables, then 7 syllables, and then 5 again.

yeah, that's what I was always told too. >.> It's what I'm used to now.

Shouldn't be like this
Working in a cube all day
Bitter loneliness

Excessum · (#57 (**permalink**))

duck tape the heart
and run to find a hammer
don't cry