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MaymeRachael 09-29-2007 07:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by onexsoul (Post 250861)
haha thanks i made it up as i went
thats y its so dang confusign
i first was talking about this guy but then i switched to my friend who hate me now... so yea!!! ^.^

I sometimes find it easier to start with one line and then just keep typing...


Black roses
Stained with blood...
Your blood.
My white hands are painted...
Painted with a unremovable paint.
Another knife in my hands
This stain will never come off
Your cold dead eyes...
Stare up at the celing.
Your twisted, mutilated body lays alone...
On my kitchen room floor.

Lien 09-29-2007 07:29 PM

OMG you're making me cry
:D hihi i sometimes write poems 2

MaymeRachael 09-29-2007 09:17 PM

Then you should totally post them ^_^
Okay, here's another...


Cherry Blossom petals fall upon my face,
They hide my tears that you caused me to cry.

What have I done to cause you so much pain?
My apologies seem to go unnoticed.

You shut me out of everything in your life.
Again, I feel unwanted.

My hope has died - somewhere deep inside my soul,
Forever I will love you.

:pinkcry:

onexsoul 09-29-2007 09:41 PM

dang ur good!

ur heart is beating
but not for long
i will hold it
bleeding in my palm
u will cry at me
and say
"i gave u my heart;
u took it and walked away"
ill look at u with sorrow in my eyes
and then ill say
"i gave u my heart;
u took it and left it in the sand"
u will look all confused and then truth will dawn on ur face
"u picked it back up and gave it away?"
ill nod and take ur heart with me as i walk away
u cry after me
"give me my heart u evil girl"
i squeez it in my hand and watch it burst in my palm

animerox102 09-29-2007 09:46 PM

hate has taken over me
I can not cry anymore
for the tears you have taken from me
Will never come back through the door

The voices you hear in your head
are me
I am here with you
until you really are without thee

-Me



Old fashioned I know.

MaymeRachael 09-29-2007 09:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by onexsoul (Post 251981)
dang ur good!

:pinkbow:
Thanx ^_^


I :rheart: the ryhmes...I find them so hard to do sometimes ^_^
Okay here we go again...

Wath as the moon fades to black
Look closely in the mirror
As your heart does the exact same
Your tears seem nonexistant
Yet mine are all too real
I'm confused by your actions
I thought our love was true
But once again you've proved me wrong

animerox102 09-29-2007 09:51 PM

BRAVA!!!!BRAVMISIO (or whatever that is!!!) AWSOME!!!

MaymeRachael 09-29-2007 09:59 PM

Thanx so much guys...Seriously I'm just typing these as they come to me....


Watch as I burry you
Deep inside my blackened soul
Your screams seen muffled
I do my best to ignore them
Some how you start to control my thoughts
Next my actions are not my own
Then my words are next to go
I start to tell you I'm sorry
But I take everything back over - for now
You're still locked up...
Chained up...
And slowly dying
And still I stay the same.

?????????

SweetSuicide 10-01-2007 10:27 PM

the first cut bleeds
its stings for a bit
and then it's over
and im done with it

the blood keeps coming
no sign of stopping
no reason to live
no one can stop me

i tried to hard
but not hard enough
it comes down to this
i can't be sorry enough

this was my choice
the only way to go
but i want you to know
i'll forever miss you so.

~me.

yes.. i am a very depressed person... get over it.

CrystalTear 10-02-2007 04:19 PM

I sing a song,
A song in the rain.
A macabre melody,
Lyrics filled with pain.

When the rain rolls down my cheek,
When the water hits my skin.
It feels as if I’m crying,
As if I’m commiting a sin.

A feeling I haven’t had for a long time,
A feeling filled with tears.
I’ve forbidden myself to cry,
To not give in to my fears.

When I feel tears,
I push them away.
But you can’t push the rain,
The rain is here to stay.

I sing a song,
A song in the rain.
A macabre melody,
Lyrics filled with pain.

“Life binds you,
May death set you free.”


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