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onexsoul 11-12-2007 03:12 PM

I can see you comming
Walking slowly
I fly into your arms
You catch me
You smile at me yet
Your eyes are empty of love
I ignore it and kiss your lips
they are unresponsive
"wat is it?" i ask
"nothing..." You reply
looking into the distance
I search your eyes
looking for something
ANYTHING that will resemble
wat used to be there
nothing
there is nothing
I hold you close
and burry my face into your chest
your arms wrap around me
yet the gesture seems empty
"I cant... my dear.. i.." He trails off
I nodd, understanding.
He has moved on
on the few months he was gone
he had moved on
I pull away, and turn my head hiding my facefrom you
"I understand... I should go..."
I start to walk
he grabs my wrist
"I swear, Its not you..."
I shake my arm free
"I know... good bye"
I continue walking, tears streaming down my cheeks
i was broken
he was gone
i go to turn the corner,
looking down
not paying attention
I see lights comming fast
dazed and confused
I look up and see a pair of lights
they are comming fast
i dont understand
something hits me
the lights, they hit me
i hear the crunch of bones
something breaks
i cannot feel anything
it must not be me...
i feel a searing pain within me
i ignore it
something heavy is atop me
the pressure leaves me
i hear screaming
i hear talking
i hear his voice
whispering in my ear
i see darkness

odonata 11-14-2007 12:09 AM

Pain spears up again with a bright spark.
The grace of your knee moving to my face,
the sweet blood in my nose and mouth,
Pain as I cough out another tooth.

Fear now as its hard to breath.
Soft arms around my neck squeezing,
sweet breath in my ear whispering,
colours swim around my head.

Peace has come and comforted me.
I can still feel you ontop of my body,
warm and sobbing as you kiss my lips.
I can still almost hear you say goodbye.

(this is a scat poem)

odonata 11-14-2007 01:45 AM

My dead girlfriend...


They said I was kinda crazy, they laughed at me aswell.
They just could not understand my love for my dearly departed girl.

I like to take her shopping for all the latest things, It really makes the sales clerk sicken when my corpse girl grins.

I try to talk to my dead girl and she listens really good, but when I try to go for more I just get rotten wood.

I dont complain about the smells, the rotting or the puss. I just wish that my dead girlfriend would finally give it up ;)

odonata 11-14-2007 01:55 AM

Last one...

Men at the door, but they are not welcome.
Banging and smashing, will the door hold them?
NO...

Crashing sounds, movement, they rush from the hall.
Upon me they strike as I crouch by the wall.
Pause...

The 'snick' of the batton drawn
PAIN!
Watching the arc of a sharp blade
PAIN!
The smell of gunpowder, ears ringing.
Silence...

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Hope u liked the dark side. All done in freeform.

Acidreptile 11-14-2007 01:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by odonata (Post 294483)
My dead girlfriend...


They said I was kinda crazy, they laughed at me aswell.
They just could not understand my love for my dearly departed girl.

I like to take her shopping for all the latest things, It really makes the sales clerk sicken when my corpse girl grins.

I try to talk to my dead girl and she listens really good, but when I try to go for more I just get rotten wood.

I dont complain about the smells, the rotting or the puss. I just wish that my dead girlfriend would finally give it up ;)

Dude Necrophiliac.:eek:

You rules.

AkuenKigahen 11-14-2007 04:57 AM

Bones

Can you tell me that the bones
Are still underneath the earth
Or are they still in the hearse
And is there still a curse

My sanity can't seem to take it all
And can you break down the wall
That separates the living and the dead
Can you fix the broken
So that they are right again

Are the decayed bodies
Still under your bed
The ones that you dig from their graves
So that you won't sleep alone tonight

Now lets burn the coffins
Maybe their spirits will disappear
And my soul begin to get weaker
I think I'm sinking deeper to the bottom

My sanity can't seem to take it all
And can you break down the wall
That separates the living and the dead
Can you fix the broken
So that they are right again

Acidreptile 11-14-2007 05:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AkuenKigahen (Post 294745)
Bones

Can you tell me that the bones
Are still underneath the earth
Or are they still in the hearse
And is there still a curse

My sanity can't seem to take it all
And can you break down the wall
That separates the living and the dead
Can you fix the broken
So that they are right again

Are the decayed bodies
Still under your bed
The ones that you dig from their graves
So that you won't sleep alone tonight

Now lets burn the coffins
Maybe their spirits will disappear
And my soul begin to get weaker
I think I'm sinking deeper to the bottom

My sanity can't seem to take it all
And can you break down the wall
That separates the living and the dead
Can you fix the broken
So that they are right again

Cool one.:vsign:

odonata 11-17-2007 09:32 PM

I dont think she knew how much I loved her.
I tried to show her by beating her up.
After that she didn't talk much.
She didn't do much of anything anymore.
Let alone breathing or living, or stuff like that.

(sick I know)
For reference, this was based on an anime scene I have seen.

odonata 11-17-2007 09:45 PM

****18+ only ***

I'll pull your f*cking teeth out mother f*cker you don't mean sh*t too me.
I'll cut your f*cking balls off, and have them for my tea.

I'm gonna make you scream so loud you'll bust your f*cking head
If you don't tell me where it is, your wife and kids are dead.

Slykaz1 11-26-2007 05:41 PM

I step out my door
and its not my home
i'm in.
I see flowers blooming
blissfully. birds chasing
each other gayishly
but within me a storm
is brewing.
Twisteres, and shades of dark
go through my head.
nothing I see is what it
seems.
I wish I could understand
when spoken to.
Nothing makes sense to me
I no longer view the world
positively.
What's wrong with me. It
disgusts me to see people
happily, Why are they
happy? SHUT-UP!
The laughter *covering my ears*
They're laughing at me.
SHUT-UP!
They talk....about me.
SHUT-UP!
I load my shotgun.
BAM! BAM! BAM!
DIE! DIE! DIE!
I! HATE! YOU!


Blood rushing from my
hands....what is this?
My heart is pounding in
my ears....is this it?
I look into the mirror, holes
in my body. What did I do?
Pain rushes to my body.
AAAAAHHHHHHH!!!
Hot tears roll down my face

They rush to my side
All I see is they're laughter
LEAVE ME ALONE!

Nothing......why is it dark?

A light....must go to the light
....must....light....overwhelming
....bright as day....voices
....familiar voices.
"She's back! She's made it!
Slowly blinking my eyes I see
the faces who laughed at me.
Hot tears roll down my face.

NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

Must I live through life
again! Let me go back!
Let me stay gone forever!
I don't want to be here!
Let me....let me go!
.....let me go away!

Again the silence....the nothingness....

*Gasp* As I wake to find myself sweating in the darkness. I get up to turn
my light on. I'm in my room. I look in my mirror, take off my shirt and there on my chest are three scars, of were the bullets entered my body. "It wasn't a dream. It was real." I go to my mother's room. She's fast asleep. "Mom."
"What is it hunny?" I hesitate. "Did I really try to kill myself?" A long pause from my mother. "Yes you did." "Oh I see." I go back to my room without another word.

I find my small pistol
....load it
....put it to my head
...."Good-bye cruel world"
....BAM!


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