"Dark Poems"
 

Tell him i'm sorry,
Tell him I care,
Tell him this last thing,
it's because of him
that i'm not there
Cold tears of sorrow
agony, disgust and lust
Cold tears of pain
Cheers to us
The Broken

~amber D.~

i wrote this just now

my friend hates me
i tried to put my mixed and confused feelings into it...


I always wanted to say
that ur the one i loved
but i never got to say it
i always wanted to tell you
that i hated you
but you always looked at me with despair
with that one look my heart was broken
im sry i never told you
how i felt
what i wanted
how you broke me in two
with every word
u killed me
u wished me dead
and i was
i never wanted to hurt you tho
i wanted u to understand
i loved you
but i also hated you
i never wanted you to no
how i felt
it scared me to no that you would be killd
when i told you the truth
im sry
ive caused you pain
ive caused you heartach
ill never forgive myself for it
im sry...
ill c u again
maybe
ill be looking up
while youll be looking down upon me
ill scream at you to release me
youll laugh but look at me with those heartbreaking eyes
and ill just say
im sry
ull turn your head and walk away
asking me “How many times have you said that, but uve leid.”
Ill then cry out “Im sry!!!”
but ull back will turned and u wont hear me
so in this ill tell you
im sry
again
and
again
im sry
im sry
please forgive me
my dear
my love
my darling
my bestfriend
im sry

dang girl ^_^ Really good tho ^_~ Keep it up!

(I saw a thread that said dark poems and i wrote this as I went so please dont get bad if it's bad lol)

I look up to the sky
And I start wondering why
Anything I do
Just won't let me die
I'm tried of pain
The greif is too strong
My knees are weak
And at night I fall
The scars keep multipying
Not knowing how they get there
At night I am different
From when I wake at the dawn
I need to escape
I need to be released
From this pain and misrey
I'm so unhappy.

loved it!!!

I Hate You

There’s no mercy for the stupid
There’s no hope for the wicked
I hate the glass,I hate the stones
I hate everything else
But not more than I hate you

I cut you at pieces,throw you at the blender
I kill you just like you killed me
Is not enough to stab the knife
I’ll reap your existence with the scythe

Suffered for eternity,suffered the weak
Crossed the flesh,annihilated the child
Fueled the hate,and I incinerate

I hate the world,I hate the people
I hate the pain,I hate the masterplan
I hate everything else
But not more than I hate you

I killed you,just like you killed me
Can’t stand you breathing
I steal your life
I cut you at pieces
I’m free of your pathetic presence
I hate you more than everything else


PS: I always use "At" instead of "In".

WOW U GUYS ARE REALLY GOOD...

*sigh* my poems arent good and i cant make them up well
my friend wote one

here it is


He came into her room that night
wreaking of spririts and wine
He gently shook her awake
she looked up, smiled softly
then she saw it
the spirits dancing in the firey pits of his eyes
He stared at her, greedy demons taking her in
She stared back fearfully, fighting back the building tears
"Not again" she sobbed "Not tonight, please"
She begged, pleaded, and fell silent, crying to herself
He tugged up her night gown and pulled it off
Tossing her around like a rag doll
One hand holding her down, the other tugging at his own waistband
He smiled at her, an evil foreboding smile
A great sob wracked her small fragile frame

He came into her bed that night
With intentions none to pure
He later left her bed that night
Leaving her broken, crimson and tears flowing freely


its interesting
and creepy
i liked how she wrote it tho.... she 17 btw...

haha thanks i made it up as i went
thats y its so dang confusign
i first was talking about this guy but then i switched to my friend who hate me now... so yea!!! ^.^

I sometimes find it easier to start with one line and then just keep typing...


Black roses
Stained with blood...
Your blood.
My white hands are painted...
Painted with a unremovable paint.
Another knife in my hands
This stain will never come off
Your cold dead eyes...
Stare up at the celing.
Your twisted, mutilated body lays alone...
On my kitchen room floor.

Then you should totally post them ^_^
Okay, here's another...


Cherry Blossom petals fall upon my face,
They hide my tears that you caused me to cry.

What have I done to cause you so much pain?
My apologies seem to go unnoticed.

You shut me out of everything in your life.
Again, I feel unwanted.

My hope has died - somewhere deep inside my soul,
Forever I will love you.

:pinkcry:

dang ur good!

ur heart is beating
but not for long
i will hold it
bleeding in my palm
u will cry at me
and say
"i gave u my heart;
u took it and walked away"
ill look at u with sorrow in my eyes
and then ill say
"i gave u my heart;
u took it and left it in the sand"
u will look all confused and then truth will dawn on ur face
"u picked it back up and gave it away?"
ill nod and take ur heart with me as i walk away
u cry after me
"give me my heart u evil girl"
i squeez it in my hand and watch it burst in my palm

hate has taken over me
I can not cry anymore
for the tears you have taken from me
Will never come back through the door

The voices you hear in your head
are me
I am here with you
until you really are without thee

-Me



Old fashioned I know.

:pinkbow:
Thanx ^_^


I :rheart: the ryhmes...I find them so hard to do sometimes ^_^
Okay here we go again...

Wath as the moon fades to black
Look closely in the mirror
As your heart does the exact same
Your tears seem nonexistant
Yet mine are all too real
I'm confused by your actions
I thought our love was true
But once again you've proved me wrong

BRAVA!!!!BRAVMISIO (or whatever that is!!!) AWSOME!!!

Thanx so much guys...Seriously I'm just typing these as they come to me....


Watch as I burry you
Deep inside my blackened soul
Your screams seen muffled
I do my best to ignore them
Some how you start to control my thoughts
Next my actions are not my own
Then my words are next to go
I start to tell you I'm sorry
But I take everything back over - for now
You're still locked up...
Chained up...
And slowly dying
And still I stay the same.

?????????

the first cut bleeds
its stings for a bit
and then it's over
and im done with it

the blood keeps coming
no sign of stopping
no reason to live
no one can stop me

i tried to hard
but not hard enough
it comes down to this
i can't be sorry enough

this was my choice
the only way to go
but i want you to know
i'll forever miss you so.

~me.

yes.. i am a very depressed person... get over it.

I sing a song,
A song in the rain.
A macabre melody,
Lyrics filled with pain.

When the rain rolls down my cheek,
When the water hits my skin.
It feels as if I’m crying,
As if I’m commiting a sin.

A feeling I haven’t had for a long time,
A feeling filled with tears.
I’ve forbidden myself to cry,
To not give in to my fears.

When I feel tears,
I push them away.
But you can’t push the rain,
The rain is here to stay.

I sing a song,
A song in the rain.
A macabre melody,
Lyrics filled with pain.

“Life binds you,
May death set you free.”

Interesting stuff guys, here is something I wrote a while back:


One More Story to Discard

So I’m finally feeling better
And my days are looking brighter
I’ve friends with speech so lively
And a Lady with touch so softly

But as I rid my room of clutter,
I come across a dusty letter.
With one blow of my hot breath,
I reveal it’s bright pink colour.

Why oh why can’t I simply escape?
Greet me Grimly, greet me with care.
My days are nothing but one long nightmare
Since I’ve peeked at my own inscape.

I undo its ancient foldings,
And begin to read its heading,
It says “Hey Mr. Sadistic”
And I return to days simplistic.

It talks about trips to Boston,
Makes mention of sweet romantic sceneries
It references many good times,
but it does not hide the bad times.

I rediscovered secrets and feelings
Regarding pains of a vast separation
And to think, back then, I could function
without our integration!

Why oh why can’t I simply escape?
Greet me Grimly, greet me with care.
My days are nothing but one long nightmare
Since I’ve peeked at my own inscape.

My friends love to party,
They even love to study,
And then there’s that one Manic
That loves to brawl and stir up panic.
As for me, my sport was resting,
Especially on her comfy, warm lap.
But I took those times for granted,
Much like this old and dusty letter!

Why oh why can’t I simply escape?
Greet me Grimly, greet me with care.
My days are nothing but one long nightmare
Since I’ve peeked at my own inscape.

Will I ever escape these nightmares?
Can I erase a lifetime?
Can I walk these roads alone?
Or does this sad and dusty letter
Deserve sadistic company?

Why oh why can't I simply escape?
Greet me Grimly, greet me with care.
My days are nothing but one long nightmare
Since I've peeked at my own inscape.

You all are do so well I'm glad I'm not the only one here that write stuff like this!!! Keep it up everyone ^_^

:rheart:

If you want dark poems and stories....
EDGAR ALLAN POE EDGAR ALLAN POE EDGAR ALLAN POE EDGAR ALLAN POE
You catch my drift...

Indeed!!!!!!:D

I'm not sure its really dark poetry as much as it is wierd poetry...But here I go >_< (Non-ryhming poem)

A Loud Silence (If Only Sound Would Come)

A lost relic, in time and in life, long denounced by its people, a world of little to no value, where only ghosts may linger in there past glory, for when they return to there time, those ghosts are in fact only human. The past still lingers in this place, though its air of glory and followers of its ideals have vanished without a trace, spread throughout this giant land, a song to be sung on another occasion. And as the moon and stars cross over the sky, only the loud silence can be sensed, not heard, for what is left in this place to hear? I know not what the commonplace thought is, and that is why I write, to be different, and to express it in a place where common is unheard of, if only a sound would come. Is this poetry? Is this prayer? Or is this what is left of this place? I sing a song that no one will hear. If only the song could have been heard by those who loved this place, if only they too remained here, a ghost to linger in there former glory, to spread there hearts in hopes of finding there wings, only to fall upon the earth once more, yet again only a human, then they too could sing this song. Yet they do not remain, and thus cannot sing, for only the loud silence can be sensed. If only a sound would come just once more, maybe, I would be saved.

That's very cool Powermad 147!:vsign:

*Looks at the freakishly quick response* Nice time! beats other records I've seen =P

Everyone writes dark poetry, It's the perfect way to vent unwanted evil ^_^

Very good SweetSuicide very good!:D

untitled...
 

this is a song not a poem,
but it's pretty deep...


(intro)
i'm surrounded
by faces with no names
and they can't see mee
as i'm lying here in chains
their eyes are clouded
their minds are filled with lies
as the helpless go on bleeding
and the tourtured choke and die

they can't see us
can't see past their mundane lives
can't see the blood
can't hear the words that stab like knives
won't see the wounds that they've inflicted
untill it's much to late to cure
while dreams are crshed
and voices hushed
by the ones that think they're pure

prechorus:

insanity
cruelty
caged inside
locked and unseen
reality
is choking me
outside i'm fine
inside hearts scream
chorus:

and the pain
that we feel
is all too real
as we wait
in the shadows
for someone to heal
broken hearts
torn apart
and then
thrown in our faces
dissapear
and leave empty
hollow dark spaces
verse:

as the rain falls
from above us we're glad
cause it hides what
comes from eyes when we're sad
they don't notice
scars from pain through the years
as the words that we're speaking
fall on unhearing deaf ears
(pre chorus)
(chorus)
end verse:

forgotten
alone
and in pain
the solitude
drives me insane
so crowded
at the same time
im lonely
if only they'd listen
if only______



by: Ana Corpse

If one could only see,
The world through my eyes.
Where hope is just a mystery,
Where life is bound by blood.

Where darkness feels like a feather,
Where shadows seem to breathe.
If one could only see,
The deceiving power
Of light.

Angels who cry and scream,
To be freed from the cage of God.
To be swallowed by the taste of freedom.

If one could only see,
The heartbeats through the air.
Floating like ghosts,
Beating like a march.

If one could only see,
The world through my eyes.
The one,
Would die.

I wrote 15 new ones in 2 days so here's a start...

#3/15



The sun sets
I'm ready for another night
Passing through body after body
Crying mother, worried father, lost child

Close your eyes and dream
Of a quiet place
Where you can lay down
Soon to die in unheard screams

Drowing size pools
Of tears
Flow from your bloodshot eyes
Black holes consume
Your once beautiful face



:rheart: MaymeRachael

Very cool that one sister!!!!!!!!!

Awww thank you I'll post others later.......maybe ^^ SO STAY TUNED ^_^'

All of you are so good. Here is a poem of mine.

My world of darkness
Covered in fear
My hate is blinded
By my bloody tears

My darker truth
With hidden lies
My evil spirit
Somewhere it hides

My blacken heart
Slowly beats
My deadly love
Devours me there is no more time

My empty soul
Withers away
To be lost and forgotten
Never to be seen by the day

My blood blackens the day
There is no other way
The darkness will pay
No matter what anyone says

My world of nothingness
Covered in darkness
I won’t let it win
Won’t ever give in
I will never fall

Lets see...I'll try to write this one on the spot, and quick, because I have math to do and shows to watch ^_^

Thoughts of a vampire

Savor the lasting flavor as it lingers in your mouth, as the salt flows over your tongue, a bed of roses never as sweet as this. A solid scream breaks through the viel of night, disrupting it's quiet admirers as they gaze at the stars that seem so close. As the flood flows through, as the skin breaks, as the teeth dig in, you wonder not what has happened, but what it must be like on the other side. Savor the lasting flavor as it lingers in your mouth, as the dying sing there forget-me-nots, as the drained cry out for mercy, as the willing give you a look of utter affection, savor the flavor as it lingers, for so soon it shall fade, and you will once again be alone.

Sorry, this one is sort of strange...I'm no good at rhyming poetry, so I try my best to do without rhymes...It's supposed to be a vampires thoughts as it is biting people, and various reactions. At least, thats my interpretation of it. Believe what you want it to be, i guess...=P

Endless Dream