tell me if you think this is good

[KohanaIto]

Originally Posted by Narutocrazy101

I luv your idea and i make comics I really do. i can make your idea famous. you have potential and i need to talk to you.

well then feel free to ^_^ i just don't know how exactly im going to write it....i know the begging the middle and the end but nothing inbetween. thats where i get stuck....perhaps you have some ideas you could share? or give me tips?

[Narutocrazy101]

The storys main character is an immortal. ok. let me think... If you can get your eyes on what the story is mainly about it will come to you. oh and Z, that name has got change. Maybe makani i dont know Something else. Stay cool

[yukiNnight]

well that story is okay but i think you should add more there and i don't think it was a dream

[KohanaIto]

Originally Posted by Narutocrazy101

The storys main character is an immortal. ok. let me think... If you can get your eyes on what the story is mainly about it will come to you. oh and Z, that name has got change. Maybe makani i dont know Something else. Stay cool

well i know what its mainly about and i have all the details in my head but no clue how to exactly write them down.... but thats life and as for the name Z...well yea it probably does have to change lol...i want a cute name but something strong as well....something that rolls off the tongue lol any way ^_^ laters

[KohanaIto]

Originally Posted by yukiNnight

well that story is okay but i think you should add more there and i don't think it was a dream

i probably should add more and it was a dream...i actually wrote the whole story down in four books unfortunately that got lost when my house burntr down so im starting all over again ^_^

[forgotenmemory]

How about the name fayn!!!!!

[BleachFanatic]

Originally Posted by SaginumaEki

Question,

Why do the names need to be Japanese?


Also, this sounds like a mixture of Harry Potter and Star Wars. It's like Voldemort is in a far away galaxy.

what do you mean they have to be Japaneses where did manga come from? I personally like Japanese names there so sweet i wish mine was your plain jane American name and it was Japanese i envy Japanese people and there culture having the samurai's bing so technologically ahead of me over here im moving when i graduate haha " calls best friend and says hey were going to japan " i like this idea of a new manga but to be honest iv read ones like this alot it seems like awwwwwwww can't remember the name the one with the Alter Users except your's doesn't have the twist in it well at least you didn't say it did

[KohanaIto]

Originally Posted by forgotenmemory

How about the name fayn!!!!!

thats kool...and its a possibility *_*

[KohanaIto]

Originally Posted by BleachFanatic

what do you mean they have to be Japaneses where did manga come from? I personally like Japanese names there so sweet i wish mine was your plain jane American name and it was Japanese i envy Japanese people and there culture having the samurai's bing so technologically ahead of me over here im moving when i graduate haha " calls best friend and says hey were going to japan " i like this idea of a new manga but to be honest iv read ones like this alot it seems like awwwwwwww can't remember the name the one with the Alter Users except your's doesn't have the twist in it well at least you didn't say it did

there is a twist....believe me there is....i woont tell you that though....you'll just have to imagine till you read it ;]

[Narutocrazy101]

What about Kanari. It is a great name.