tell me if you think this is good

[Narutocrazy101]

Originally Posted by BleachFanatic

I personally like Japanese names there so sweet i wish mine was your plain jane American name and it was Japanese i envy Japanese people and there culture having the samurai's bing so technologically ahead of me over here im moving when i graduate haha " calls best friend and says hey were going to japan " i like this idea of a new manga but to be honest iv read ones like this alot it seems like awwwwwwww can't remember the name the one with the Alter Users except your's doesn't have the twist in it well at least you didn't say it did

Dont envy us japanese people. You what americans say sined did i spell that right?

[Narutocrazy101]

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[KohanaIto]

Originally Posted by Narutocrazy101

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uh-oh...blah? what is blah?

[Narutocrazy101]

Blah means nothing. ok nothing lol

[KohanaIto]

Originally Posted by Narutocrazy101

Blah means nothing. ok nothing lol

lol well thats a new one XD

[kokunin]

story sounds incoomplete, as if it wouldnt make volume one unless more action was put into it, in which cas eyou can make a manga with half of its pages (unedited or edited) all fighting and shooting and erunning and punching and kicking and all that, BUT, story is what some want, action is what others want...the question is which do you want...

[KohanaIto]

Originally Posted by kokunin

story sounds incoomplete, as if it wouldnt make volume one unless more action was put into it, in which cas eyou can make a manga with half of its pages (unedited or edited) all fighting and shooting and erunning and punching and kicking and all that, BUT, story is what some want, action is what others want...the question is which do you want...

this isnt an action story...but yes there is gore in it if thats what your saying. this is more of a mystery/adventure story

[kokunin]

I like dave, the japanese like the americas, unless your really old in which case you hate us for what we did in WW2 (please don't hate me if I'm wrong, but i did meet a japanese old man who wasn't kind but his grand daughter was heh heh heh). and the americas liek the japanese...so we like each other YAAAAAAY!!! i really think the idea is alot like a trigun type of thing. There are 2 gods (they dobn't have to be called gods to be gods, anything more powerful than a human and VERY scarce in number, you could call a god) and they fight for what each believes in. Same for transformers. Optimus prime, and Megatron are the same thing. one loves humans and one doesn't...they destroy each other until one stops moving and end of show...by the way, wwhat happened to the trigun series (the manga, I REALLY LIKED IT!!! ALMOST MADE ME CRY HOW HE WOULDN't KILL ANYBODY!!!)

[kokunin]

Originally Posted by KohanaIto

this isnt an action story...but yes there is gore in it if thats what your saying. this is more of a mystery/adventure story

so for you, you like mystery and adventure...okay so then where's the adventure...a comic book can actually be put into words (more words make better pictures (kinda liek a good book, it makes the picture for yo uin your head) see what I'm getting at...you have an idea, cool (there's no new story, to many humans, too much time) now flesh it out, you got the bones, now you need ligaments, cartalidge, tendons, muscle, skin, hair(hair being the side quests, kinda like clamp with tsubasa and xxxholic) I draw a ton, i also write, but i don't mix them (makes for a some scrambled ideas...you can tell when someone's writing and someone's drawing or when someone's making it up as they go along)

[IhrTodeswunsch]

Well. It sounds good, just the names need to be switched around just a bit, and I think you'd be good to go! (lol, didn't know that you knew Esca xD)