tell me if you think this is good

[KohanaIto]

Originally Posted by kokunin

so for you, you like mystery and adventure...okay so then where's the adventure...a comic book can actually be put into words (more words make better pictures (kinda liek a good book, it makes the picture for yo uin your head) see what I'm getting at...you have an idea, cool (there's no new story, to many humans, too much time) now flesh it out, you got the bones, now you need ligaments, cartalidge, tendons, muscle, skin, hair(hair being the side quests, kinda like clamp with tsubasa and xxxholic) I draw a ton, i also write, but i don't mix them (makes for a some scrambled ideas...you can tell when someone's writing and someone's drawing or when someone's making it up as they go along)

my problem right now is that im stuck in the bones part....i have it all figured out in my head i just dont know how to put it onto paper....

[KohanaIto]

Originally Posted by IhrTodeswunsch

Well. It sounds good, just the names need to be switched around just a bit, and I think you'd be good to go! (lol, didn't know that you knew Esca xD)

thanx :] yea i know the names are a bit funky....i was thinking of naming the main girl Noriko...watcha think?

[kokunin]

okay, so are you writing it down or are you doing chracter design, charater design can come whenever ...lets see...tell em the story as if it were an rpg...

[KohanaIto]

check it...read what i put up....its alli have right now but i hope you all like it

[KohanaIto]

Originally Posted by kokunin

okay, so are you writing it down or are you doing chracter design, charater design can come whenever ...lets see...tell em the story as if it were an rpg...

I have the story completely written down, it's just getting it into a story format -_- right now it's just random jumbles and thoughts that haven't been completed....the good news is that I've written more than half the rough draft