Please help me to read this English sentence:

[Koir]

Originally Posted by YuriTokoro

Does "grey hair" mean "you make your mother nervous" ?

I stress her out sometimes, so yes

[YuriTokoro]

Originally Posted by Koir

I stress her out sometimes, so yes

I see.
Japanese people would say “white hair”.
We don’t say “grey” when our hair got changed the color due to stress, and I didn’t know you say it “grey”, so I needed asking. Thanks!

You must be a very good son of her.

[Koir]

Originally Posted by YuriTokoro

I see.
Japanese people would say “white hair”.
We don’t say “grey” when our hair changes color due to stress, and I didn’t know that you say “grey” so I needed to ask. Thanks!

You must be a very good son of hers.

Heh heh...well, I do what I can.

[YuriTokoro]

Hi.
Would you correct my English, please?


"My Guitar"

My guitar is Gibson LesPoul Custom. It’s been broken. It doesn’t make sound. I think it might due to some disconnecting. So I brought it to a guitar repair shop today. They didn’t say how many days they need to repair it. I don’t have a guitar to play now!!

Speaking of a guitar, I used to have electric guitar lessons and the teacher was very good. I have met two great teachers and he is one of them.
The most impressive words he said was, “I don’t judge students’ or other people’s performance negatively.”
Actually, he had never said “No,” even I played badly. Even I tried strange ways, he didn’t say “No” or “It’s impossible.” I was very happy and enjoyed liberty in the class.
What a fond memory! I wish I could play my guitar just now!!
Thank you!

[sycayersou]

Originally Posted by YuriTokoro

Hi.
Would you correct my English, please?

Gladly, my English is impeccable.
(I'll also brush up your grammar, is places, okay?)
(And I'll bold the changes I make, so you can see them.)

"My Guitar"

My guitar is a Gibson LesPoul Custom. It’s been broken. It doesn’t make sound. I thought it might due to a disconnection, so I took it to a guitar repair shop today. They didn’t say how many days they need to repair it.
I don’t have a guitar to play now!

Speaking of a guitar, I used to have electric guitar lessons and the teacher was very good. I have met two great teachers and he is one of them.
The most impressive words he said was, “I don’t judge students' or other people’s performance negatively.”
Actually, he had never said “No,” even though/if [I'm not sure which you intended here, so I gave both ^^] I played badly. Even I tried strange ways, he didn’t say “No” or “It’s impossible.” I was very happy and enjoyed liberty in the class.
What a fond memory! I wish I could play my guitar just now!
Thank you!

Some of these changes just make it read nicer (and keep your intended message intact), some of them are grammatical niggles that I decided to correct.
^//^; sorry.

[Yuusuke]

Originally Posted by YuriTokoro

Hi.
Would you correct my English, please?


"My Guitar"

My guitar is Gibson LesPoul Custom. It’s been broken. It doesn’t make sound. I think it might due to some disconnections. So I brought it to a guitar repair shop today. They didn’t say how many days they need to repair it and I don’t have a guitar to play now!!

Speaking of guitars, I used to have electric guitar lessons and the teacher was very good. I have met two great teachers and he(name instead of he) is one of them.
The most impressive words(i would say thing) he said was, “I don’t judge students’ or other people’s performance negatively.”
Actually, he had never said “No,” even if I played badly. Even I tried strange (the word weird would be a better choice)ways, he didn’t say “No” or “It’s impossible.” I was very happy and enjoyed liberty in the class.(jenjoyed the freedom or maybe enjoyed the class))
What a fond memory! I wish I could play my guitar just now!!
Thank you!

Just a few things here and there but other than that. It was good.

[YuriTokoro]

Originally Posted by sycayersou

Gladly, my English is impeccable.
(I'll also brush up your grammar, is places, okay?)
(And I'll bold the changes I make, so you can see them.)
Some of these changes just make it read nicer (and keep your intended message intact), some of them are grammatical niggles that I decided to correct.
^//^; sorry.

Hi, sycayersou.
Thank you very much!
I've studied English grammar when I was a student, but I still make many mistakes.
Your corrections are very helpful. Thanks!

[YuriTokoro]

Originally Posted by Yuusuke

Just a few things here and there but other than that. It was good.

Hi, Yuusuke.
Thanks a lot!
“The most impressive thing”, “weird ways” and "enjoy freedom”. I see. There are many things I don’t know. I referred to a dictionary when I wrote the composition, but still there are many unnatural expressions. Thanks for helping!

[Koir]

Originally Posted by YuriTokoro

Hi.
Would you correct my English, please?


"My Guitar"

My guitar is a Gibson Les Paul Custom. It's broken, and doesn't make any sounds. I think it might be due to something disconnecting inside it. Today, I brought it to a guitar repair shop. They didn’t say how many days they need to repair it. I don’t have a guitar to play now!!

Speaking of guitars, I used to take electric guitar lessons from a very good teacher. I have met two great teachers, and he is one of them.
The most impressive words he said were, “I don’t judge students’ or other people’s performance negatively.”
Actually, he had never said “No,” even when I played badly. I tried strange ways of playing, he didn’t say “No” or “It’s impossible.” I was very happy and enjoyed complete freedom in the class.
What a fond memory! I wish I could play my guitar just now!!
Thank you!

Another revision to add to your knowledge, Yuri. I don't play the guitar myself, but I definitely enjoy guitar-driven rock.

Have a great day, Yuri!

[sycayersou]

Originally Posted by YuriTokoro

Hi, sycayersou.
Thank you very much!
I've studied English grammar when I was a student, but I still make many mistakes.
Your corrections are very helpful. Thanks!

Everyone elses' corrections are good, too.
(It's just bugging me where they're not switching that one full stop to a comma.
;>_>

I'm such a little grammarnazi)