Is this correct?

[Incarnate134]

So i've been taking japanese now for 2 months and the teacher wants us to write our schedule. My vocabulary isn't very good and im still getting used to particles and conjugation, and I was wondering if someone could see if this was correct. Should also mention, I don't know much kanji or any katakana .
so here goes:
わたし　は　八時　に　おきます。それから　あさごは ん　を　たべます。わたし　は　十一時　コーヒー　を 　のみます。

so that's it right now, i'm actually pretty embarassed about this, but I really want to learn and the teacher said a great way to do is to join a forum, so here I am.

[KyleGoetz]

Originally Posted by Incarnate134

So i've been taking japanese now for 2 months and the teacher wants us to write our schedule. My vocabulary isn't very good and im still getting used to particles and conjugation, and I was wondering if someone could see if this was correct. Should also mention, I don't know much kanji or any katakana .
so here goes:
わたし　は　八時　に　おきます。それから　あさごは ん　を　たべます。わたし　は　十一時　コーヒー　を 　のみます。

so that's it right now, i'm actually pretty embarassed about this, but I really want to learn and the teacher said a great way to do is to join a forum, so here I am.

I think your teacher would prefer if you did your own homework.

For what it's worth, your attempt is not terrible. Definitely no reason to feel embarrassed.

One thing: THERE ARE NO SPACES IN JAPANESE ARGHARGH ARGH ARGH ARG

[MMM]

Originally Posted by Incarnate134

So i've been taking japanese now for 2 months and the teacher wants us to write our schedule. My vocabulary isn't very good and im still getting used to particles and conjugation, and I was wondering if someone could see if this was correct. Should also mention, I don't know much kanji or any katakana .
so here goes:
わたし　は　八時　に　おきます。それから　あさごは ん　を　たべます。わたし　は　十一時　コーヒー　を 　のみます。

so that's it right now, i'm actually pretty embarassed about this, but I really want to learn and the teacher said a great way to do is to join a forum, so here I am.

Looking good.

[hinata2]

what i can read is good but i do not know any kanji

[Nagoyankee]

Originally Posted by hinata2

what i can read is good but i do not know any kanji

That means you don't know if the sentences are correct, period.

Why do you even think the OP, who is serious enough to learn kanji, need an opinion from a lazy dude who keeps refusing to learn them?

[hinata2]

i am starting to learn kanji i have been learning katakana before kanji

[Incarnate134]

Originally Posted by KyleGoetz

I think your teacher would prefer if you did your own homework.

For what it's worth, your attempt is not terrible. Definitely no reason to feel embarrassed.

One thing: THERE ARE NO SPACES IN JAPANESE ARGHARGH ARGH ARGH ARG

I understand what you mean by doing my own homework. It is incredibly difficult to get in touch with my teacher outside of class, so I figured i'd ask the community for more of an opinion. And no spaces...gotcha. =D

[Aether]

I think you might want a に after 十一時. Anyway, looks good.

がんばってね

[Incarnate134]

Thank you for the responses, I really appreciate the help, and I hope to use these forums more as time goes on.