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Translation please 英訳してくれませんか?! - 01-18-2010, 04:32 PM

①子供をなくしたご両親の悲しみが痛いほど分かる。
②わたしにも言いたいことが山ほどある。
③久しぶりに国の母の声を聞いて、嬉しくてなきたいほ どだった。
④持ちきれないほどの荷物があったのでタクシーで帰っ た。
⑤うそをついたばかりに恋人に嫌われてしまった。
⑥この本は小学生でも読めるようにルビがつけてありま す。
⑦予定どおり終わるように計画を立ててやってください 。


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01-18-2010, 04:34 PM

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①子供をなくしたご両親の悲しみが痛いほど分かる。
②わたしにも言いたいことが山ほどある。
③久しぶりに国の母の声を聞いて、嬉しくてなきたいほ どだった。
④持ちきれないほどの荷物があったのでタクシーで帰っ た。
⑤うそをついたばかりに恋人に嫌われてしまった。
⑥この本は小学生でも読めるようにルビがつけてありま す。
⑦予定どおり終わるように計画を立ててやってください 。
Why don't you give it a try, and we will help?
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Why don't you give it a try, and we will help?
そうですねーーー日本語がずいぶん苦手なばかりに、翻 訳できないと思います。。。なのに、やってみることに しました!お次の翻訳で誤差を見つけたら、教えてくだ さい!

I understand how much the sadness of parents who don't have children is painful:SS??!! (the extent it reaches....)

(someone) has a lot to say to me (things which they want to say blablabla)

hearing the voice of the country's mother after a long time, I was happy to the extent that I wanted to cry.

Since I had mochikerenai (I donno the meaning) luggages, I returned by taxi.

Because I lied, my lover hated me (started to hate me):SS

In order to enable elementary school students to read this book, i donno how to interpret the remainder:SSS

Please DO plan in order to end (in the same way) as planned (scheduled)

**As I told you, my Japanese level does not permit me to translate such sentences, therefore, you may see my translations full of mistakes. Certainly, if I had the potential to translate them, I wouldn't post them right here:P


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Certainly, if I had the potential to translate them, I wouldn't post them right here:P
Except that this isn't a free translation site, so you should be asking questions about things that are within your skill level rather than posting numerous sentences in several different places hoping for a quick translation.
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そうですねーーー日本語がずいぶん苦手なばかりに、翻 訳できないと思います。。。なのに、やってみることに しました!お次の翻訳で誤差を見つけたら、教えてくだ さい!

I understand how much the sadness of parents who don't have children is painful:SS??!! (the extent it reaches....)

(someone) has a lot to say to me (things which they want to say blablabla)

hearing the voice of the country's mother after a long time, I was happy to the extent that I wanted to cry.

Since I had mochikerenai (I donno the meaning) luggages, I returned by taxi.

Because I lied, my lover hated me (started to hate me):SS

In order to enable elementary school students to read this book, i donno how to interpret the remainder:SSS

Please DO plan in order to end (in the same way) as planned (scheduled)

**As I told you, my Japanese level does not permit me to translate such sentences, therefore, you may see my translations full of mistakes. Certainly, if I had the potential to translate them, I wouldn't post them right here:P
1. こどもをなくする is "to lose a child" not "not to have children"
2. I've got a lot of things I want to say even to me.
4. 持ちきれない means "too many to hold/carry"; here, 〜きれない is an auxiliary verb meaning "being too many/much"
6. "Ruby characters have been added to this book so that even an elementary school student can read it." Ruby character - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
7. "In order to finish as planned, please decide on a plan."
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Except that this isn't a free translation site, so you should be asking questions about things that are within your skill level rather than posting numerous sentences in several different places hoping for a quick translation.
BTW, I posted exactly the same sentences in 2 places in order to increase probability that someone realizes them since I received no reply to the ones I posted a while ago. Plus, I don't think it is that big deal which may lead you to become so aggressive (because of such balderdash:S)


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1. こどもをなくする is "to lose a child" not "not to have children"
2. I've got a lot of things I want to say even to me.
4. 持ちきれない means "too many to hold/carry"; here, 〜きれない is an auxiliary verb meaning "being too many/much"
6. "Ruby characters have been added to this book so that even an elementary school student can read it." Ruby character - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
7. "In order to finish as planned, please decide on a plan."
KyleGoetzさん、お助けてくれてありがとうございました( ^-^)


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2. I've got a lot of things I want to say even to me.
It doesn't say "even to me".  

わたしにも言いたいことが山ほどある。 = I, too, have a lot to say.
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スミスに家族がある。

私に家族がある。
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It doesn't say "even to me".  

わたしにも言いたいことが山ほどある。 = I, too, have a lot to say.
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スミスに家族がある。

私に家族がある。

This is certainly more logical than the previous translation Thanks


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